Our Song

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Jan 29, 2008


If tomorrow you feel lonely it's ok.
Just turn on your radio and hear our song.
The song we play when we're alone.
The song that no one knows the meaning to except us.

The sweet melody plays in your head all day,
Even with all the work you have to do.
The rhythm takes you into an unknown world,
Where you happen to think of only me.

Those touching words MC Magic sings,
Feels like he's singing our lives away.
There's no other song like that,
That will have our special meaning.

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  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I love this. The idea is presented in the title and then added to in detail within the poem. I especially like the line
    "If tomorrow you feel lonely it's ok.
    Just turn on your radio and hear our song"

    5/5 Awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Need to work the flow. the meaning comes through great. Keep trying I some time have to rework a poem more than 10 times before is sounds good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    This poem at first it was a little hard to get the flow
    but the meaning you got across its just needs a little more rhythm and its would be great...4/5..=)!!

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