Arguing With Me

by Hawaiizang3l   Jan 30, 2008


Arguing With Me

I'm doing extremely well
No I still feel the unbearable pain
My smile won't leave my face
My tears continue to fall like rain
My sky is such a sunny blue
The clouds follow me where I go
I'm so full of happiness and joy
I've never felt so lifeless and low
I couldn't ask for much more
All I wanted was just you
My reality is better then dreams
I can't stand knowing the truth
Around me the birds hum their tunes
The nauseating silence makes me weep
I'm excited to start a brand new day
I still cry myself to sleep
Life is going so good now
I don't know how much more I can take
How did I become so lucky
Where did I make the mistake
I'm telling you I'm doing good
I'm telling you I feel weak
It does no good to argue
Yeah cause I'm just arguing with me

Copyright © 2008 By Kekaulike Dabis

January 29, 2008

+i constantly feel bipolar on some days! i tell myself im ok, im better off. Then other days i'm sad & weak, & just want him back! :(

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  • 15 years ago

    by Bugg

    I think that it might be better if you put this poem into stanzas, but then again, that's just a personal preference. lol I liked how it changed from happy to angry every few lines. That was cool.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well written... two described two different nature so beautifully...

    the ending is superb..

    good job..

    keep writing...

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Love this poem, rymes very well 5/5

    check out some of mine when you've got time.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This is a good poem. The flow was great. Although, the structure wasn't that good. Maybe try putting it into stanzas. It's good though. The imagery was good.

    .:CiNdY:.

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