What happened to originality?

by Lilly   Jan 30, 2008


We dance a new tango
in time to the beat
Turning and swirling
but our feet never meet

The floor a spring
for your dress to fly
Jumping and sliding
but the room is a lie

It opens up
and invites you inside
you stroll on through
has innocence died?

You are part
of the invisible plan
to transform you all
into a copycat clan

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alicja B

    P.s. 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicja B

    Good poem!
    We dance a new tango
    in time to the beat
    Turning and swirling
    but our feet never meet
    that is a great beginning to a great poem. it is really gets the message across. i would really appreciate it you would comment and rate my poem if you like.
    Marionettes, puppets, and manikins galore.
    it has the same message as your poem. please tell me what you think of it.

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