This poem was good, but the first stanza was kind of bad. The rest of the poem seems pretty good though. Try fixing the first stanza to make the poem look good.

.:CiNdY:.

This poem was good, but the first stanza was kind of bad. The rest of the poem seems pretty good though. Try fixing the first stanza to make the poem look good.

.:CiNdY:.

Remarkable poem.

There was an spelling error

(Likw) in the morning time
>>> suppose to be (Like)

The first stanza you tried to rhyme but its all good, you could work a little on it, then it would be perfect. Other then the spelling error and the stanza mistake, your poem was lovely 5/5 You deserve it for trying your best.

Take care,

Sarah A.

So i say that you're my thunderstorm
Raindrops genly run down my face
Make my heart beat, my mind is gone
When here in the rain we dance

^beautiful stanza! It the poem complete for me. I loved how unique it was and the imagery you created was flawless. Well done *5/5*

I gave you 5/5 I just feel you might need to reread each poem you write.

Summer day full of laugh and fun

maybe laughs and fun.

I'm not saying i'm perfect i make mistakes too. :)

Oh thanx
of course i do reread))
in Russian "laugh" is uncountable that's why i made a mistake. thnx for noticing it, lol)

At first i wasnt so sure about this one.. it started off a little shakey but the more i read the more i understood what you were talking about...you ended it very well.

nice job.5/5

Haha i had to read this (hence thy name) it was wonderfully written i specailly like the stanze "So i say that you're my thunderstorm
Raindrops genly run down my face
Make my heart beat, my mind is gone
When here in the rain we dance" good job 5/5

This was so beautiful. It truly was. :]

"So i say that you're my thunderstorm
Raindrops genly run down my face
Make my heart beat, my mind is gone
When here in the rain we dance"

^ I absolutely adore this stanza. The imagery in this stanza is outstanding. :]] It was so vivid, and eyecatching.

Amazing job, m'dear. :] Overall: 5.5
- Steph.

I really loved this poem. It was filled with so much emotion, and your choice of words was brilliant. I loved the metaphor, "So I say that you're my thunderstorm" that was my favorite line of the whole poem. [: Keep up the good work!

Very good poem, beautifully written! And the concept was very nice. Great write 5/5

Wow this was deep. and beautiful i loved how you compared the suna dn the rain to the one you love. it was beautiful indeed. a wonderful write, and a fantastic flow. a lovely heartfelt poem. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.