Comments : One More Time

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    This poem is amazing. I guess thats all I can say.

  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Alone in my Quandary xX

    NyC poEm buddy

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Very emotional

  • 16 years ago

    by Nici

    Repitiion was enticing and brought the words to life. Emotion flowed from each word.

    Nici

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    This is a very good poem, many people can relate to this and I enjoyed it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer Dziak

    It definately hit deep.
    bravo.

  • 16 years ago

    by jessie

    I know nothing about cutting but you help to understand the subject in you writing i 've known people with addictions so for you to compare the two things is helpful to people who doesn't know much about "cutting"

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem really throws you into a cutters mind. You never know the exitment of a cutter unless you are one, but here you described it in a very good way. I loved the rhymes and flow, all went together nicely. Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Once again, you are very talented! Keep up the the nice work... i love your choice of words in each of your poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Once more you impress me. So much from someone so young. You remind me of myself at that age. My words, then, were also strong. Keep going.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Deep poem... I'm against cutting though so this didn't appeal to me that much. Loved the side-note, its good to know you don't cut! The flow was great, the word choice was immaculate, and the concept was decent! 5/5 :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This poem was one of those that you are sure it's about one thing, but it turns out to be about another. Loved it. I could almost feel it during the last stanza. The words pulled you in, and the whole poem was greatly written. Excellent. Another 5/5!