Your my remedy

by Bekka Smekka   Feb 2, 2008


No sleep i can find,
I'm loosing my mind.
I can't get no rest,
but i'm doing my best.

My head feels stuffy,
like its made out of dough.
Whenever i feel like this,
then no one can know.

Don't let anyone close,
don't let anyone near.
Don't let them suffer too,
its infecting them i fear.

But even in my darkest mood,
i never reach my low.
You're always there to pick me up,
that why you should know.

I love you dear,
i love you so.
Please don't ever
let me go.

And when i had the measles,
the chicken pox and flu.
I i laughed because you were there,
to help me get right through.

So when you ever feel some doubts,
while your thinking of me.
Remember you have healed my heart,
you are my remedy!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kellie

    I like it alot, its sweet
    when you wrote "i can't get no rest' it is a contradiction. it should be "i can get no rest' or 'i can't rest' good job anywayz
    kelliexx

  • 16 years ago

    by Noo track to walk

    Nice poem...you use great wordings ! i like that...keep it up ! i give 5/5 ..=)

  • 16 years ago

    by mabona

    You sound as though u more of a humble person than anything else,
    u have brilliant writting skills that i cant deny and wow the beauty in ur words this is nice.
    keep them coming

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Very sweet :] Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Very sweet, the rhyme scheme was a good touch, loved the message and emotions behind the piece, loved it keep up the good work.