A saying

by peaunt   Feb 3, 2008


One day a sopran had to cross a river.he ask the frog if he could ride on his back.The frog said no u will sting me.the Sopran said i promise i will not sing u .they were half why across when the frog felt something a stings in his back.as the poison being to work.they being to sink.the frog said why did u do that now we will both die

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    You have a great idea to work with here. I really wish you would fix it up a bit. This can be your rough draft. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by erin girl

    I think its pretty awesome actually. Yeah it needs some work, but i get the main idea and its pretty true. I see how trusting others is a good thing, if you don't you could both lose in the end.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    Mary...this is nice but it needs some work...sorry but that's the way i see it...still luv ya...Mike...xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Talk about needing work..............