Wow...this poem made me cry hard, i am serious! It was such a pure dark touch...i felt misery and left out in this poem! Just love it KYLE!! I am trying to stop crying and shaking but that was good!!<3
I just love your poetry<3

Love Ya Brother :]
Courtney Holland

Nice poem... we seem to feel the same things bud

<3 Kaylee

Wow...this is a great poem i liked it an your a sweet and funny guy so there is no need to be dark cause it only hurts you worse..look for the good happy things in life!but good poem loooved it

Amazing..

Kyle that was great
im not sure wat to think
in one poem you talk about sttandin tall
the next yo say you are givin up
ppleas don give up plez

Really quite deep. I like it alot.

Oh,luv it so much, like the line:
Im starting to feel it again...
the blackness poisoning my soul,
--so true

Wow this is really good i like this one, dont give up on her though....thnks for complimentin me on mine lol im not obsessed i just am in love with someone i just cant have even though he wants me if that makes any sense......yeah

Wow you really are awsome just like she said you really can write awsome poems! i love them i voted and you got 5/5 good work!!!!

Wow this was deep. an amazing write. very powerful very expressive. it had a great flow also.

pain sinking into my soul,
cold tears bleeding from my eyes,
heartache suffocating my heart,
all the hope inside, slowly dies.

i loved that stanza most. it was mesmerizing. i loved the emotion you expressed it really made the poem worth while. job well done. 5/5.

-ashlei.

This poem is absolutely devine. Love it!

Darkness is who i am
i cannot resist the bleeding
i am the the fallen angel
reborn as a demon
loved this stanza great job 5/5

Wow...i really enjoyed this poem. full of emotion. My favorite part is when you said..."i am the fallen angel,
reborn as a demon". i really like it for some reason. very vivid. GREAT job,

victoria