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thank you to all tat do visit my poems. they might not be the best out ther but i am still a begginner. one wrote an animated women i think you should check out for it is going to be published. and i would greatly appreciat it i got some comments on what you think and what i can do to improve my poetry. |
Why does it hurt so much when i think about my...
and of all that has happened...
They say life is full of adventures. well were is...
my head is sore as well as my back can someone...
A fresh breeze blows
on my face today...
Bring on the pain,
Wakened by the blood river...
I am sitting here
wondering about life...
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