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  • DeathlyAmore
    17 years ago

    I will comment three of your poems. HOWEVER, it will be a constructive criticism. It will be fair, but I will not humiliate either.

    I will vote, and comment three of your poems. All you have to do is tell me WHICH POEMS by NAME or LINK.

    That is all. =]

    _[Deathly'Amore]

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    I just want you to do one. :]

    It's called "A Contradicting Life".

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1001909

    Thanks so munch!

  • Kaila
    17 years ago

    Alrighty
    please do
    Nightmares comeing true
    Cupid's little arrow
    && looking out for you
    thanks

  • Normal is the Watchword
    17 years ago

    The Hart's Passion, it's a piece of fanfiction and long so if that is all you want to do then that is ok

  • Wallace
    17 years ago

    Calling me home when the dust settles
    Canon ball kiss
    Forsaking heart
    Thanks alot.

  • A l y s s a
    17 years ago

    My 3 latest please! I'll be sure to return the favour!

    Thanks so much!

    Ally. x

  • TheRapture03
    17 years ago

    Coudl you rrc

    We Never Know
    Today, You Went Away
    Heaven's Shining Door

  • Chase
    17 years ago

    Could you please do:

    "The Chest"
    "Crunchy Watermelon Bubble Gum"
    "Memories"

    Thank you!!! Please be very critical! ^^

  • Shinobi
    17 years ago

    Cool, I only need two poems commented though.
    - Dead to you
    - Emotionless Departure

    Thanks a lot! Have a pleasant read

  • Tammie
    17 years ago

    Could you please do my latest three;

    Dancing With Sharks on Ocean Floors
    Questions Woven Within Silence
    Days Plunged in Innocence.

    Thank you!

  • SpEcIaLmE
    17 years ago

    Hey this is very nice of u
    i would like u 2 do the following 2 please if u want 2 do a 3rd its up 2 u
    "dont try"
    "my mask"
    thanxs

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    If this offer is still open I would really appreciate feedback on..
    The Pigeon [Parody]
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=989405

    Thanks in advance.

    ~Pete.

  • Lizaveta
    17 years ago

    Could you please read this one:

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=995976

    and this:
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=995973

    thank you)))))

  • JustKristina
    17 years ago

    Hey sweetie! this is nice of you! :]

    The Perfect Valentine's Gift

    I've Found My Mr. Perfect

    I Love You More

    Thank you!!! :]

  • DeathlyAmore
    17 years ago

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    Finished with:

    Adam's
    -For the ladies,
    -Myspace makes me hard
    -The joys of Masturbation.

    Cayce's
    -A Contradicting life

    Kaila's
    -Nightmares coming true.
    -Cupids little arrow
    -Looking out for you

    Evanescence's
    -The heart's passion

    Wallace
    -Calling me home when the dust settles
    -Canon ball kiss
    -Forsaking heart

    Ally x Never Loves Before X's
    [I need the name and link, sorry]

    The Jack of heart's
    -We never know
    -Today, you went away
    -Heaven's shining door

    Chase's
    -The Chest
    -Crunchy watermelon bubble gum
    -Memories

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    Working on:

    Gemma Rosanna's
    -From Beneath

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    Then:

    Shinobi's
    -Dead to you
    -Emotionless departure

    Tammie's
    -Dancing with sharks on ocean floors
    -Questing woven within silence
    -Days plunged in innocence

    Specialme's
    -Don't try
    -My mask

    Pete's
    -The pigeon [Parody]

    Lizaveta's
    -http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=995976
    -http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=995973

    Mary's
    -Http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=976670
    -http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1002213
    -http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/nature/poems.php?id=1001761

    Kristina's
    -The Perfect Valentine's gift
    -Ive found my mr.perfect
    -I love you more

    Lol, have mercy on my soul.
    Give me an hour or so.

  • Michelle18
    17 years ago

    If your not to busy commenting others...could you please do...

    *my terrible sin
    *desperate bitchin'
    *he was sent up in the sky

    thanx

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    "Distant Whisper in the Wind"
    thanks :]

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Can you do please do:

    Hevean Needed a Hero (Collab)
    Passion within
    Starlight Night (Reprise)

    Thanks in advance, Joe

  • AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
    17 years ago

    Can you do:

    A Sad Girl's Prayers(Fallen Angel No Longer)

    and any other 2 of my latest

    Please and thank you =]

  • Dark Demise
    17 years ago

    If you could do

    Nightmare

    And

    Rapture

    I would apreciate,

    I did one of yours before i even opened up this box lol,

  • Dino Dhamphyr
    17 years ago

    *Missing You*

    *Foolish*

    *Captivity*

    thanks =]