"Someday" - 1/3

I wrote a new poem called "Someday". It was a random spur-of-the-moment inspiration I got while talking to the girl I'm in love with... so I would love some feedback!

If you r/r/c this poem, I'll r/r/c 3 in return.

Plot:
A poem about loving actions and emotions.

Rules:
Must comment back here to receive credit.
Must vote!

Other:
Please give me honest feedback!
Thank you for reading! :)

Done. Nice poem..XDD

Please do

Love ISnt Imaginary
If I were to Die Tonight
Caged for Life

Thanks ahead of time..

Done :)
My newest three please.
Thank you!

jess ~

Just r/r/c yours... quite an impressive one :)

if you could please do any three of mine that catch your eye, i'd be most thankful

thx

isabel

Im done with that poem
could you please
do my top 3 please.

-Raindrops

Done, please do any 3 of mine.

Thanks

Done
Please read rate and comment on my latest

Done...
I LOVED IT!
do any 3 you want...
You don't even have to do three really. just try and do one with not very many comments... please and thanks=]

I'll get right on it

Please do
"The Unknown Soulmate"
"Slave of Cold"
&
"The Heartless Game"

Done.

Please do my three newest pieces.

Incase you like to have them here.

Live and let die
Wish upon a star.
Steal or Everyday

Commented it, it was lovelyy!

Please dooo

=Dreamer's never leave dreamland
=Medicated with moonshine, searching for that lunar eclipse
=With a junkie's smile, I rebuild
thank youuu

Oh wow I'm slow. Haha I finished your poem rated and commented on it. just forgot to post here.

Please r/r/c any 3 of my poems.

Thanks

Will do
will you do my latest thanks:)

Done.
Please do..

"Color me Happy"
"Loves Glorious Song"
"Aching Aspirations"

thanks. :]

Done. lol You still owe me five from your 'Our story'
D<

So do any poem. :)