So bored...I'll read and comment on anyones poems! :)

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    Yeah that says it all...Just let me know if u want me to read!! :)

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    I checked out all of your poems very nice! Anyone else?

  • xxangelchicxx2000
    20 years ago

    Holding on to dear life
    Trying to stay alive
    I was wondering about you
    Mostly that where were you?
    You said that you would be here
    So now where are you?
    I am in pain
    While darkness prevails
    Save me
    While you can
    Pretty soon you won’t have
    Nothing to save
    I am dying inside
    Even if I don’t look it
    You would see it
    If you were here
    But you are not
    So what’s the point?

    comment on mine please~~!!!~~

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    thats good i'll check out some more of yours!

  • creasy
    20 years ago

    will you plz comment on some of mine

  • bucky
    20 years ago

    could u plz check out some if mine

  • Daniel Goding
    20 years ago

    you can comment on mine :)

  • R F
    20 years ago

    Hello Broken Angel ? lol
    how u doing mate ? i realy would be happy if you read some of my poems,am new here,n would love to have good mates,i want to hear ur opinions too : )

    See ya
    Peace

  • TrUtH hUrTs
    20 years ago

    hi i know u read a couple of mine...thanx!! could u plz read vote and comment on lost love?? plzz

  • Alya
    20 years ago

    I'd really like you to read/rate/comment my poetry.

  • lifes big mistake
    20 years ago

    please can u read/comment on my poems would mean alot thanks

    lil kit xxx

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    sure I'll read some of yours...this is going to take a while...haha but i'm bored so its all good

  • ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤
    20 years ago

    Lol, you've probably read a lot of mine, but if you are STILL bored you can check some more out.

  • Austin
    20 years ago

    Im not sure if you read mine before or not but I would really appreciate it if you read some of mine please and thank you for comments and ratings

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    I read all of yours...very nice! Anyone else?

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    come on now...anyone?!?!?!?!?? SOOOOO BORED

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    aww thanks! I love when people give me comments so I know that everyone else must love it too. Ill be sure to check yours out.
    Love Always.
    Angel

  • ** JeNa **
    20 years ago

    can you please rate and comment some of my featured poems, thank you i really appreicate it

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    sure I'll read them!

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    anyone else?

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    I checked them out...

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    anyone else? come on!!!

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    nobody else?!?!?!?!? Come on now!!!!!!!!!

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    wow nobody wants comments...thats new!

  • Kill The Complex
    20 years ago

    Don't tell me why
    I'm so near to commit a crime
    When I stay alone here in front of you

    Illusion falls when you're not honest about the way I feel
    I know I need only your voice

    Saving all my words only for you
    Forgive me
    Saving all my words only for you
    I don't know why

    There's a limit to defy
    With the vision of the future at my feet

    The night embrace me while
    This picture simply blows me away
    I feel I'll need only your voice

    Saving all my words only for you
    Forgive me

    And I'm lonely here inside of me
    Deep inside of me
    Believe in the light in me

    And I'm lonely here inside of me
    Deep inside of me
    I've never
    Never felt myself this way before
    I don't want to leave you with my fears
    If you'll disappear

    Believe in the light in me
    Saving all my words only for you

    Forgive me
    Falling on knees only for you

  • Essence of Blight
    20 years ago

    Hey hey! I would love votes/comments on my latest poem. It's somewhere on my shorter side but wut do u think? Maybe on some that i dont have many comments or somethin 2 lol

    Thanks, Luye

  • shannon
    20 years ago

    heyy do you want to check out mine maybe my darling..haha i am not sure if you have before..

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    haha yeah i read yours

  • TrUtH hUrTs
    20 years ago

    wow u really ARE bored ..lol and i know uve read some of my poems..check out the others plzz..pretty plzz

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    haha yeah I'll read some more!

  • Chris Engle
    20 years ago

    im always... ALWAYS looking for more votes and comments... i dont have that many poems, but the ones i have are very important to me....

    i would greatly appriciate it if you could read some of mine, particularly whichever has the least amount of comments at the moment (i think its "dont miss your chance")

    ill read and vote on yours... if i really like it or have anything to say, ill be sure to comment!!

    ~chris

  • *Sherrie*
    20 years ago

    could you please take a look at my poems... thanks... Sherrie...

  • lifes big mistake
    20 years ago

    please could you take a look and comment on mine thanks?
    xxx

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    Sure I'll check yours out too! Anyone else?

  • katie!
    20 years ago

    If you could comment on some of mine that would be great thanx

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    I read all of yours! Very nice!

  • happy days
    20 years ago

    cud u read some of mine- thanks

  • SmileeItsBritt
    20 years ago

    yes, I'll comment on yours as well...anyone else?