*x*I want to comment on your poems*x*

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    i woudln mind comments=)

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey тѕεкоdεи i've read foundation of sand and lisa x i've read a few of yours too../
    Let me know if there's any others.

    Be good and have fun:)
    Tash
    xoxox

  • t i f f a n y ♥
    20 years ago

    Comment on some of my new ones and featured ones. Thanks a lot!

  • GoodMorning
    20 years ago

    umm "My broken heart's cure" and "Go ahead"

    thank you =).....and ill read a couple of yours right now...

  • Georgi
    20 years ago

    pls read and comment on my two latest ones! thank you i will return the favour xxx

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey everyone,

    K Justine and Geogi i read your 2 and Lost and ALone i've read Go Ahead.

    Tiffany and Lost and Alone i promise to read the rest of your work tommorow, sorry:)

    Let me know of any others
    Tash

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    k i've read everyone's poems, great work guys!!!!

    Anyone else?

  • ღ Christina ღ
    20 years ago

    please read and comment on sum of my featured poems! thanx! if any1 does i will comment on yours!

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    hey Rohit i've read yours and Christina i will within the next 2 days read some of your poems.

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Please check out these poems:
    "My dream boy dosen't exist"
    "Damn I hate you"

    please comment and rate..=D
    thanks a lot.. hugs from me!!

  • themeuneverseen
    20 years ago

    Could you please read.......
    I Love You
    It Will Be OK (letter to my friend)

    Please and thank you and I will return the favor!

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    There we go all done, very good poems everyone...
    Any1 else?

  • Courtney Lynn
    20 years ago

    Prom 2005
    Hush
    WHY?
    Why did you do this to me?

    And any others you want to read!!

  • steve
    20 years ago

    sure I dunno how good they are though...Ill chech yours too

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    done I've read it all, wicked word everyone!!!

    Let me know who else wants me to read their work and if anyone above has other poems they want read.....

  • Courtney Lynn
    20 years ago

    Lovers at my door
    Life in a non moral world.

    If you want to that is...
    thanks
    COURTNEY!!

  • Richard
    20 years ago

    can u read my 2 poems called rotten body n walk away thx

  • AJ
    20 years ago

    A little puppet
    thanks and I'll go do yours now

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    All read and commented on:) Great work, AmAzInG!!!

    And as always let me know if there's any others or any1 else.........

    Thank
    luvvies
    Tash

  • themeuneverseen
    20 years ago

    Could you please rate and comment on my newest poem Lonely Little Girl...??
    Please and thank you!:)

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    There we go i've done that for you, amazing work!

    Anyone else?

  • VampyraKi†
    20 years ago

    me me me pick me!!!!! ok i am a dork could you read any of my poems and give me blunt comments

  • Robert
    20 years ago

    Got a new list check them out if you can please
    Striped Killer
    Love Is The End
    The True Light
    Dark Soldier
    All I Can Give

    Thanx

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    MEMEME..pick me..

    Okey you can just read any you want to...some of the featured ones perhaps?

  • Christina Gomes
    20 years ago

    OOO READ MINE!!

    it's called:

    Her Notebook(a suicide story)

    it's based on a true story...soo PLEASE read it. the girl it's about..i didn't talk to much...she was just usually....there...

  • GoodMorning
    20 years ago

    yeah....could you please comment on....well any poem would be great....it would mean so much, and i'm open to any criticism you or other people might have....thanks =)

  • --SlIpPin_AwAy--
    20 years ago

    If u would, please comment on 'little girl'
    Thanks!

  • t i f f a n y ♥
    20 years ago

    You can comment on any of my poems. I would really appreciate it! Thanks a lot.

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey everyone sorry it's been taking ages but my computer messing me around so i've only able to read a small few before i got thrown off the side by my dumbass computer:) Lol ok enough rambling but i promise to have it all done by sat, sorry if it takes that long but ireally wanna read them and comment propely.....K thanks and sorry!
    Love you wildly
    Tash

  • Emma
    20 years ago

    If you would comment and vote on any of my poems I would be truly grateful. Love Emma xxx

  • lilhippyangel
    20 years ago

    check out mine I only have one and comment

  • sHaTtErEdMiStAkE
    20 years ago

    hey i would love it if you would comment on some of my poems.. could you comment on

    *Fake Smile and Lonely Tears
    *Torn Soul
    *Every Scar: A Memory
    *Pain Is Only the Beggining...Scars Are the Result
    *Hidden Life
    *Released
    *Reasons Of Me
    *A Tragic Suicide
    *Final Goodbye

    I know this is alot but most people aren't commenting on my poems and it's making me feel like not postin them. I mean i post comments on a lot of other peoples poems but yet some of them don't do the same for me. You don't have to look at all of them, but if you do get the time would you please look at them. thx so much

    Madison

  • Daniel Goding
    20 years ago

    "the thought of your death is more then I can take"
    check it out when u have the chance and ill check out some of yours.

  • David Paul
    20 years ago

    Thoughts of a Killer or Deadly Whispers. Either of those will be good. thanx.

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey sorry once again it's taking so long but i've got to Samantha.H And i promise on saturday i'll have at least half of these poems done hopefully more if not all......But keep the requests coming in:)

    Love
    Tash
    xoxox

  • tubabassking
    20 years ago

    If you can please read Never Let Go. No one has really even looked at it yet and that makes me mad. I think its a good one and should be seen by people. please read.

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Sorry it's taken sooo long my computer is messing me around...but i promise to do this all soon!!!
    SORRY!!!!!!!!!!

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    K i've read and commented on all except for all of those ny Shattered mistake but i promise to do that soon......

    Sorry it took soo long!

    Anyone else:)

  • Sarah Ann
    20 years ago

    Can you read any of mine..I will return the favor.

  • themeuneverseen
    20 years ago

    Could you please read/rate/comment on my newest poem
    One Step At A Time

    It would mean a lot to me and ill return the favor ASAP!
    Love always,
    Haily
    xoxoxoxooxox