*x*I want to comment on your poems*x*

  • cac123
    20 years ago

    Umm if you could comment on any of these that would be greatly appreciated!! :)

    For you I wont condone
    Tainted Glass
    Tremble
    Fury Flame
    Forever Stained...
    Will Angels ever be free
    Broken record of Memories
    Black and White World
    Waiting for happiness
    Beatiful
    My truth
    The day god took you home..

    Even just a comment on one of these would mean sooo much to me, i am an aspiring writer and i hope to be able to publish my work someday, i have a looong way to go but comments are appreciated thanx :)

  • cac123
    20 years ago

    Umm if you could comment on any of these that would be greatly appreciated!! :)

    For you I wont condone
    Tainted Glass
    Tremble
    Fury Flame
    Forever Stained...
    Will Angels ever be free
    Broken record of Memories
    Black and White World
    Waiting for happiness
    Beatiful
    My truth
    The day god took you home..

    Even just a comment on one of these would mean sooo much to me, i am an aspiring writer and i hope to be able to publish my work someday, i have a looong way to go but comments are appreciated thanx :)

  • cac123
    20 years ago

    WOOPS!
    hahahha sorry i didnt mean to piost twice!!!!!!!!!

    :D

  • VampyraKi†
    20 years ago

    hey i have one or two that havent even been looked at would you tell me how they are?

  • *Guerita*
    20 years ago

    aight i will take a look at a couple of ur's if u plz look at any of mine i dont care which one

  • Psychotic Heart
    20 years ago

    Hey,can someone comment and vote on any of my poems,i'll return the favor I promise-Thanks

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey
    Ok Logan, truth hurts, SarahJane, Sazza and OddHowPeopleShake I've read and commented on a few of your poems.....Timothy,Saroya, Guerritta and Psychotic Heart i promise to read some of your work within the next 2 days at the most, I am alittle pressed for time now (Huge History test tommorow,lol!) And then superman I'll look at the poems you suggested I'll TRY read them all but it might take a few days but i promise to do that for you..

    And as always let me know if there's new or other poems you want me to read:)

    Have fun;)
    *x*Tash*x*

  • **Just Her**
    20 years ago

    Let Me Go
    Once Upon A Time
    Beautiful Saddness
    I Miss You

    (any one of those or as many as you want)thanks a lot hun

  • Samantha
    20 years ago

    You are welcome to read any of my poetry. :)

  • rachel
    20 years ago

    hey wud luv it if ppl here cud read and comment on my stuff havent bin here long and so nt many ppl no me yet. ne comments gud or critisizin r welcome
    check out ne of my poems thanx xxxxxxxx

  • Sarah-Louise
    20 years ago

    I'd be real greatful if you could check out mine...whatever tickles your fancy! Thanks, I'll return the favour! Sarah-Lou x x x

  • cac123
    20 years ago

    hey thanks sooo much for doing this for all of us, if it means as much to everyone else as it does to me then you are doing us all a wonderfull favor.
    thankx
    **~~*
    much love,
    cate

  • *Guerita*
    20 years ago

    will u plz check some of mine out i will do da same 4 u

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey all again, well once again i'm running outta time, it just seems to fly by:)

    K well Timothy, Saroya, Psychotic Heart and Gueritta ive read a few for you and i'll try to read more soon...

    Amy i've commented on let go and promise to read the other 3 soon...
    Superman I've commented on For you I won't condone and tainted glass(I'm going down the list,lol) So i'll do the rest also as soon as possible and it's also an absolute pleasure to read everybodies poems because they're all so good but i'm really glad you appreciate it.

    And then to evryone else i promise to read a few of your soon latest by thursday...

    Hope you have a great day
    Tash
    xoxox

    P.S Sorry i'm so behind but life is a little hectic but i will catch up soon and read tons of your poems:)

  • Rachel E F Allen
    20 years ago

    Would love it if you would check out any of my featured ones and I will of course return the favour. I hope things have picked up a little bit for you and that everything is ok. Cheers honey. Take care. Love Rach xx

  • cac123
    20 years ago

    thank you sooooo much you dont know what this means to me i will comment on your poems right away!! thanks again sooo much!

  • cac123
    20 years ago

    and you dont have to read all the ones i listed!! thats crazy!! lol you really dont have to, what you have done already is more then enough and i dont know how to thank you... ok ill shutup now
    =)

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey everyone how are you all?

    Well Superman it's an honour to read your poetry and i said i would so i will and there ain't a thing you can do to stop me,lol! I commented on Tremble, Fury Flame and Forever Stained, Great work!

    Amy i finished the other 3 i promised to read for you...

    Then the insane voice of reason and rachel i read a few of your poems and will try reading some more soon....

    And then like i said i'm working my way through all the other requests (I know It's slow!) but like i said i should have that all done by thursday... And of course remember to let me know if you've written any new poems or specific ones that you want me to read and i'll do that asap!

    Be good and have fun:)
    Love You Crazy!!!

  • Michael D Nalley
    20 years ago

    POPE JOHN PAUL11

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    hey everyone sorry took so long but i have finally commented on everyone's poems....AmEn:) Except Superman i haven't finished just yet but i'm working on it...

    K remember let me know if there's any other poems i need to read...

    *x*Tash*x*

  • erotema
    20 years ago

    id appreciate a review of "eclogue 001"

  • AJ
    20 years ago

    A child to sing

    Thank you and I'll return the favor

  • Anna
    20 years ago

    could you please read my poems "no fairy tale" and "take in your hands" it would mean a lot to me if you do.

    ~Anna~

  • Robert
    20 years ago

    could you read
    First Strike
    Hold Me
    Dark Soldier
    Pure Passion
    Set Free

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey i've read everyone's poems except for 2 of your Robert, pure passion and Set free... which i will however read later today or tommorow.....

    Have a great day and let me know if there's anymore poems i must read:)

    Be good;)
    Tash

  • jOdY StAr*
    20 years ago

    Loving me aint easy pt.1
    &
    Loving me aint easy pt.2

    * please read and comment thanx*

  • dragonfly
    20 years ago

    "This is not the end (i love you grandpa)"

    thanks i will return the favor.

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey everyone, commented on everything for you Robert, Josie and daniels gal, Great poems really enjoyed reading them.

    Superman i've commented on another 2 for you, broken record of memories and black and white world....

    You all know the drill:)

    Have fun and be strong:)
    Love
    *x*Tash*x*

  • Misstress
    20 years ago

    heloo....
    I would really appreciate if you can read just one of my poems..
    Thanks in advance.

  • AJ
    20 years ago

    Could you read a new one of mine "For That Day"
    ~thanks~

  • TrUtH hUrTs
    20 years ago

    comment on my stuff..any of em

  • The Angel of Secrets
    20 years ago

    Please comment on: I loved and I lost, The skies would get black, A better tomorrow, and A brand new day.
    Thank you so much:)
    It meens a lot:)
    Love ¤Line¤

  • The Angel of Secrets
    20 years ago

    Please comment on: I loved and I lost, The skies would get black, A better tomorrow, and A brand new day.
    Thank you so much:)
    It meens a lot:)
    Love ¤Line¤

  • No Motiv?
    20 years ago

    "Past" Thanks so much!

  • Hina
    20 years ago

    "When Religion Turns Evil"

    Thanks..I'll return the favor soon...

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey sorry it's taking so long again:) but i have read everyone's except No Motiv? 's poem and Hina but i promise to have that done by the weekend...

    Tash
    xoxox

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey well i've read everyones's poems! Amazing work everyone.....

    And as always let me know if there's any other poems i must read....

    Love you crazy:)
    Tash
    xoxox

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Superman i've read all those poems, amazing!

    anyone else?

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey anyone want me to read your stuff let me know

  • erotema
    20 years ago

    yes.... "a foundation of sand"
    please, if you would