*x*I want to comment on your poems*x*

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey i would love to read any poems so just let me know if you would like me to comment. and also tell me if there's a specific poem you want read and i'll gladly do that for you, and i will be HONEST and try and help where i can.
    I would also greatly appreciate it if you could check out some of my poem and let me know what you think.
    Thanks and lots of love:)
    *x*ShadowedPhoenix*x*

  • ღ*KiM*ღ
    20 years ago

    Please could you comment on at least 1 of these two poems - Silent Angel and Dear Diary... I would really appreciate it and will vote/comment on yours.
    ThankYou
    ~*~KiM~*~
    xXx

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    hey i just commented on Dear Diary and I'm on my way to comment on Silent Angel, anything else you want me to comment on?

  • katie!
    20 years ago

    any of mine would be great thank you

  • Michael D Nalley
    20 years ago

    Pease comment on NATURAL CHOICES

  • BleedingAngel
    20 years ago

    Any of my poems would b appreciated...Have read some of yours =0)

  • t i f f a n y ♥
    20 years ago

    Alright, please read "Enemy" and "All That Matters". Thanks a lot!

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey

    katie! I had a look at a few poems and i must say your extremely talented
    *BleedingAngel* I love your work it's very deep and moving.
    Micheal D Nalley i read Natural Choices and it was amazing, i've never read a poem like that.... Wow people must defiantly have a look at that poem. And then also thank you for your comment on my poem i did use your suggestion, so Thanks so much.

    And then thanks to everyone who commented on my poems, really means alot! Let me know if there's any other poems you want me to look at or when you write new ones!

    Oh and Mc I'll check her out, thanks for suggesting her to me;)

    Love You Crazy
    Tash
    xoxox

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    I've read and commented on all 3! Great poems!

    Oh and I agree "Lifes big mistake" Is awesome and defiantly under rated!

  • Jacqui Armstrong
    20 years ago

    can you read and comment come of my poems please? ill do same for you

    Jacs
    xxx

  • Georgi
    20 years ago

    pls comment on any of mine
    thanx ill do the same

  • mysterious
    20 years ago

    you're very welcom eto read and comment on my poems, plz.....i shall also return the favour....take ur pick.
    thanxz

    Lauren

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Please check out my poems:
    "eternal sunshine of the spotless mind"
    "The final cut for marc"
    and please comment/rate I would appreciate it and it would mean sooo much to me.. just tell me if you want me to check out your poems.. hugs

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey all Great poems. Miss Vicious i have already commented on eternal sunshine of a spotless mind, going to go do your other one now. Nano i comment on both, Kristina, Georgi, Jacqui and Mysterious i checked some of yours out as well, let me know if there are any more you want me to have a look at.... Great poems everyone:)

  • hussain
    20 years ago

    my latest poem pleeeeeeeeeeeease . read it :) thanks and dont foget to comment :P

  • marla
    20 years ago

    Can someone read mine please? I'm trying to get ratings on them that are over 4.3. Please?

  • mysterious
    20 years ago

    shawdowed phoenix...thanxz for commenting on my poems.....i'm glad u liked it, i will comment on urs as soon as i get time... :-)

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey Hussain i commented on your latest poem which i really enjoyed and marla i commented on a few of your poem, And Mysterious thanks so much that will be greatly apreciated......

    *x*Take care*x*

  • marla
    20 years ago

    thanks ShadowPhoenix for reading my poems and thank you for your great comments. Love much, marla

  • Sinister Soire
    20 years ago

    do you think you could look at some of mine. it would be great. and greatly appreciated, thanks.

  • Carmen
    20 years ago

    if you rate/read/comment on any of my featured poems, i will return the favor. thanks!

  • Chris Engle
    20 years ago

    I would also appreciate it if you could read any of my poems, if you want feel free to read em all (i only have like 5... most are extremely short)

    ill return the favor as best i can!!

    ~chris

    p.s. thanx in advance!!

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey Everyone.....

    I checked out some of your poems will try to read more soon, I'm in a little bit of a rush right now but the ones i did read were great and i'd just like to remind everyone that i will be honest so please don't try to kill me if you don't like what i've suggested,lol i'm scared:)
    Born2die4pride i read My blessing i've already commented on death chair i think just let me know if i haven't.

    And everyone let me know if there's new poems you want me to read or anything, would love to do so.

    Take care and lots of love...

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    I'm on my way to read your poems now:)

  • Ria
    20 years ago

    Hi!Plz comment on some of mine,I would appreciate it!Check out "the lie" "Carriage to nothingness" "colors to fade to shades of grey" and "Lost count"!whichever you want will do!!I'll comment on yours, kisses!

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Hi! please check out any of my featured poems and I will return the favour, please comment/rate!
    take care.. hugs from September

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey everyone i read some of them will read more soon, i'm in a little bit of a hurry so Ria i'll read all the rest tommorow i only read once and then i'll read a few more for you 2 tommorow.
    K love you crazy:)

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey ok sorry:) Ria i read and commented on all 4, Miss vicious i've commented on 3 and ©←жonimushaж→® i've also commented on 3.... let me know if you want me to comment on any others.

    Take care and be good:)
    LoVe
    *x*Tash*x*

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Done:)

  • Sinister Soire
    20 years ago

    i didnt notice if you commented or not so im just asking incase you didnt if you would take a look at any. thanks.

  • Brookeღ
    20 years ago

    Would u read my new one Set Free would appreciate it! Thanx!

  • TrUtH hUrTs
    20 years ago

    read some o my stuff...

  • No Motiv?
    20 years ago

    "music"

  • Georgi
    20 years ago

    pls read "so much pain" thanku soooo muchxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • happy days
    20 years ago

    plez cud u read a hero's funeral thank u so much xxx

  • ShadowedPhoenix
    20 years ago

    Hey all
    No Motiv?, *~*Georgi*~*, Brooke and happy days i commented on the poems you asked me to... feel free to tell me of any others....
    SarhJane and truth hurts i'll read some of your work within the next to days(I'm soo tired now) But i promise to the moment i can and Logan i did comment on some of your poems but i'll comment on some more the second I can..

    Be good, have fun and take care
    Love
    Tash
    xoxox

  • *~*Heart.Shaped.Rose~*~
    20 years ago

    hey i havent written many so if u vote and comment on any truthfully then i will be very grateful! thanx!

    xsarax

  • Timothy Bledsoe
    20 years ago

    If it's not too much trouble, could you read my poems and comment? There are only five of them, so it shouldn't take too long.

    Thanks a bunch

  • VampyraKi†
    20 years ago

    extremo de la ayuda el vampiro if you can dont worry i just wrote it so

  • cac123
    20 years ago

    Umm if you could comment on any of these that would be greatly appreciated!! :)

    For you I wont condone
    Tainted Glass
    Tremble
    Fury Flame
    Forever Stained...
    Will Angels ever be free
    Broken record of Memories
    Black and White World
    Waiting for happiness
    Beatiful
    My truth
    The day god took you home..

    Even just a comment on one of these would mean sooo much to me, i am an aspiring writer and i hope to be able to publish my work someday, i have a looong way to go but comments are appreciated thanx :)