Honest Critiques For All That Apply

Just post which ONE poem you'd like read...If you can't decide then post your first and second choices...If you're lucky I might even get both of them read and critiqued. :)

Missing You or My Love For You
Thanx!

Anyone would make me happy

PLease and thank you

Hey! it would be great if you could comment on my poem Let Me Live Again.. it already has the most comments, but i'm the most proud of this one and i want to make it better still. Thankyou!

My Story PArt II thanks!!!=)

The Nights of the Lost Song or The Fate of a Dreamer=)

thank you=)

Blossoming Love
or
Storm Maiden
thank you =)

Ok, guys, :) I didn't mean to sound like such an ogre earlier...lol...I enjoy reading poetry but I don't want anybody to get mad when I only end up reading one poem of theirs...As you can tell I have a lot of poems to read already so that's why I asked for just maybe the top two choices, or such. :)

By the way, if you want something, just ASK. I can't guarantee I'll always "do your bidding", but I am mostly malleable towards favors.

The Wounded Poet

I would very much appreciate it if you critiqued my poem, same goes for everybody:)

"music"

mmhmm plzz read
victory unintentional
angel eyes

Ok. I'm all caught up. Anybody else?

...If anybody has the chance, could ya tell me what you think of my newest poem?...

Thanks, if you do, thanks if you don't. :) I just really enjoy critquing the brave few who dare to ask me to...

Remember, post the name of one poem you'd like me to read, maybe two if you can't decide between them.

i will comment on ur stuff :)
pls read "so much pain"
xxxxxxx

Please read my latest:

BleedingAngel or Thank you...

I would really appreciate it, thanks in advance!!!

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm

"The lie" please!

(It's friday so have a nice weekend everybody!!!!)

could you take a look at my poem "I loved you for the lil things" please and thank you...
Sherrie

tEyS, Georgi, I tried to critque your poems but it wouldn't let me, I'll come back to you guys later on and get them. Sorry!

Otherwise, keep the poems coming!

a hero's funeral

Picture of a Girl. Please read.

Ok....*yawns* I'm still waiting for more posts!

...

I would greatly appriciate ANY of mine...I'm new at this and would really like some help.

Just close your eyes and pick one or two. Lol.

Thank you!

Ok...I'm just sitting here, with nothing to do...

Hey, if anybody is bored like me, they could check out "Ross Farup"...Great poetry...Actually they're songs but that's not the point. :)

Or you could always check out my poetry. :)

Anyway...Keep on posting, 'cause I'll keep on reading!

If you would read 'christmas with jamie' i'll kiss your feet xx or return the favour - whatever

I have a couple more new ones =) Thanks for constantly being so great to us and commenting!

Ok...And it's nothing for being great or anything...I'm just here to read and some of you guys...And girls...And note the use of the word some...Are so talented that it makes it all worth it. :)

If that made any sense to you, then you deserve a cookie. Or something. :)

Anyway, No Motiv?, I enjoy reading your work and you are welcome to post here as many times as you want...lol

Keep up the posts, guys!

Kay then...Anybody, anybody else?

I'm still waiting for some posts, people!!!

Still bored? If I might be so selfish as to request your comments on "M, Wolf" It would be much appreciated.

I know you have alredy commented on me, but would you read Forever stained? thanx so much
much love,**~~**
cate

Kay.....

...................tick, tock......................tick, tock.................tick, tock...............tick tock..............tick, tock.............tick, tock.........

I am still waiting. :)

please read comment &vote on my latest Pope John Paul 11

Again, if I might display my selfishness. "A re-telling of an old Chinese folktale"

Kay.

You have my thanks. If you still find yourself with nothing to do, I only have two more. You could finish all of mine off if you so desired.

1st: unnamed 002
2nd: unnamed 003

if you do get around to either of mine, id appreciate it.

I love your poetry, Jason.

And I always have time for more, even if I only comment on one the first time. I generally just like people to be specific.

Hey, if YOU guys are bored, check out my poetry, or better yet...Ross Farup.