I'll comment honestly

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    I will comment honestly on your poems, but I am warning you I often times do not like depression poems because they're cliche, but I do enjoy original depression poems. Tell me two of your poems and I'll be glad to comment on them. If you could return the favor I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks!

  • abcede
    20 years ago

    hey.. cool beans!! i'm in.. um.. you can read...

    well.. you don't like depressing!! , but.. ok..
    read.. THEY THOUGHT I DID NOT CARE... and um... FIGHTING SOLDIER..(that one is short.. but u mite like it, cuz i don't think it is too depressing).. if you want complete opposite from depressing..lol.. try reading ALIENS OF YO!! it's REALLY different and not Cliche! can't wait to read yours! and ANYONE ELSES!! i'll read um

  • midnight♥lullibys
    20 years ago

    aw sweet please read my 2 knew poems prisoner and x-sent-x they arnt depression poems i swear haha i'll read 1 or 2 of ur's too

  • abcede
    20 years ago

    hey do me toooo!!!!!!

  • midnight♥lullibys
    20 years ago

    who me or her

  • abcede
    20 years ago

    xerica!! lol, sorry!!!

  • Rolo
    20 years ago

    I can certainly understand why depression poems can be very boring and disappointing to read. Perhaps you would like "You are to blame". A depression poem, yes...however I believe it's original. As for another poem I'll just have you check my latest, "Invaluable object". I'll be sure to check out your poems. Thanks.

  • VampyraKi†
    20 years ago

    Hey could you comment on a dealy betrayel and the first to cry please and thank you

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • Jason Meres
    20 years ago

    Why not, "M, Wolf" and "Embrace" , if you have the time, I'd love to hear your thoughts about them. Thank you ever so much.

  • No Motiv?
    20 years ago

    "cigarettes and a gray scarf" if you have not done so already =) thanks

  • No Motiv?
    20 years ago

    "cigarettes and a gray scarf" if you have not done so already =) thanks

  • No Motiv?
    20 years ago

    "cigarettes and a gray scarf" if you have not done so already =) thanks

  • ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи
    20 years ago

    hey I commented/voted on 2 of yours just now, they're really good!
    could you check out "GOSSIP IS NO GAME" and "Life As A Stage" it would mean alot, thanks.
    ~Christina

  • Richard
    20 years ago

    heyy i commented on a bunch of urs can u do mine called Mostly I keep it out and any others ud like thx

  • Avrii Monrielle
    20 years ago

    please comment on "kiss the stars" and "never again will he hurt you"...

    ~thanks.
    Ill try to return the favor.

  • Prince Enigma
    20 years ago

    My newest poem : Loves promise forever

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    Sorry I was tired and didn't get online last night, but I'll try to catch up tonight!

  • Johnny Marlin
    20 years ago

    save your pity
    I would appreciate it

  • Sarah Ann
    20 years ago

    Please read Lost it all in you..I would return the favor.