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please read my poem "Fortunate"
thankx, and happy new year

Please comment on my newest love poem, I would love a proper comment with any constructive criticism you have to offer, I will return the favour asap!
thank you in advance

Hey, Any of my featured poems would be appreciated! thank ya

"sometimes"

i would really appreciate if you can comment and give constructive criticism on it

:) i miss constructive critism.. its hard to find now x.x

Hey! I'm so glad someone around here took the time to do that research, and that you're offering your judgement. I really want some good constructive criticism no matter how harsh. You can choose the poem I guess, I really don't know which is my strongest one... Thanks very very much!

Could you read my poem "hope" :)

heyy if you could comment on my poem beauty lies within that would be great thxx =)

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any of mine i would love to know the truth and how to improve... if i don't hear your hontesty how will i ever write better???

Could you please comment on mine Corruption

Please comment on:

I will be alright
Catch my fall
Dearest sweetheart
My sweet Angel
help her

Thank you so much =0)