i'd be happy to read rate and comment.

  • Syn
    19 years ago

    ill read rate and comment up to 3 poems.. just list them.

    And if you would be so kind as to check out my newest "The Red Death" - its about sin and the effects of your bad choices.

    *note* - if you would like me to study your poem and see if i can find any problems or give any advixe.. tell me..

    Take care,

    ~David

  • Biscuit
    19 years ago

    an excellent poem! could you comment on any of mine, i dont mind which, be as critical as you like! thanx

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Forgiveness
    Piece Of Heaven
    and any other of your choice. I would have suggested Alabama Tears but that's a five part one.

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Hey David!

    I'll go read your poem now, you may comment any of my featured poems and constructive critisism is welcome .....thanks.

  • Tiny Reader
    19 years ago

    I commented on your poem. Could you comment on:
    I didn't want you
    Vendetta
    and any other. I'd appreciate any constructive criticism. Thank you

  • Minkus
    19 years ago

    I'd appreciate it if you could rate/comment on my two newest poems, 'Accepting' and 'I Stand.' I'll rate/comment on the one you mentioned and one more. Thanks,

    DJ

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I commented =] Could you please do"
    - rage and love
    - suicide note
    - please hold my hand

    Thank you oh so much =]

    natz x0x

  • F@n©y Ket©hup
    19 years ago

    "wishing Away My Life"

    and

    "Heaven -is- Hell"

    Thank ahead of time.

    Please critique it thoroughly, especially for "Heaven -is- Hell".

    ~Atomic

  • ~~Lindsay Woods~~
    19 years ago

    ~Till the end~
    ~i am complete~
    ~scars that heal~

    **thanks**
    ~*Linz*~

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Left comment on your poem. Great write!

    Please rate & comment on the following if you don't mind:
    "Dinner is served"
    "If only..."
    "Love... for what it's worth..."

    Thanks!

    J. Lau

  • Brigitte
    19 years ago

    Hey could you please comment on my newest poem "Tale of a Forgotten Soul"? I really want to know what everyone thinks about it! Thanks so much! And as always I'll return the favor!

  • t i f f a n y ♥
    19 years ago

    Please read:
    I'm Sorry.
    Peace & Hurtful Words.
    Being Me.

    Thank you.

  • Alex Marlatt
    19 years ago

    "Rip My Heart Out Yet Again"

    "She Cant Love Me"

    "My Sorrow"

    that'd be groovy gravy thanks man,
    I'm off to see yours now

  • holly
    19 years ago

    aeyh could you read and tell me how to improve Moving on, or not and SOS and Crying from the Eyes and Bleeding From the Heart please xxALLYxx

  • Syn
    19 years ago

    okay guys.. my internet was down.. so give me a little bit to get back to you okay? i promise ill get to you all.. ill post periodically.

    ~David

  • cookie
    19 years ago

    on the inside i read your poem it was great

  • Syn
    19 years ago

    MY1&only and Biscuit... Done. working on a few more...

  • Syn
    19 years ago

    kaylee i did one of yours... but i also realised you didnt comment on mine.. so i insisted on stopping.. next..
    ~david

  • Syn
    19 years ago

    Silver and sarah.. both finished.. ill do more later...

    ~David

  • Sole
    19 years ago

    If you could choose any of my featured poems - that would be great [Just off to read yours now].

    Peace. [sole]

  • alwaysremeniceus
    19 years ago

    I'd really appreciate it if you could read and comment on 'Pain', 'So called Happiness' and 'Belief'.

    thanks
    -kelsie

  • Syn
    19 years ago

    still working on it.. dont think i quit.. im just slow.

    ~David

  • BleedingAngel
    19 years ago

    I voted and commented =0) Please comment on:

    She is alone
    I will pretend
    How come

    Thank you so much

  • azlan26
    19 years ago

    Hi please can you read
    Lonely fantasy
    Our rain
    The fur farm

    Off to see yours now =]

  • Syn
    19 years ago

    this would be alot easier if i didnt have dial up.. lol.. still working.

  • Syn
    19 years ago

    im getting this done.. one poem at a time guys... one poem at a time.

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    Passerby
    Commandments for a Perfect Man
    It Still Lives...

  • Michael D Nalley
    19 years ago

    please r/r/c on Blood on the Rose

  • LettersFromEnnis
    19 years ago

    May you please read my three newest poems. Ill return the favor. Thanks ahead of time.

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Can you read: Are You listening?

  • Daze
    19 years ago

    can you read my only featured one?
    it has no title because i haven't found one yet,

    thanks