i'd be happy to read rate and comment.

ill read rate and comment up to 3 poems.. just list them.

And if you would be so kind as to check out my newest "The Red Death" - its about sin and the effects of your bad choices.

*note* - if you would like me to study your poem and see if i can find any problems or give any advixe.. tell me..

Take care,

~David

an excellent poem! could you comment on any of mine, i dont mind which, be as critical as you like! thanx

Forgiveness
Piece Of Heaven
and any other of your choice. I would have suggested Alabama Tears but that's a five part one.

Hey David!

I'll go read your poem now, you may comment any of my featured poems and constructive critisism is welcome .....thanks.

I commented on your poem. Could you comment on:
I didn't want you
Vendetta
and any other. I'd appreciate any constructive criticism. Thank you

I'd appreciate it if you could rate/comment on my two newest poems, 'Accepting' and 'I Stand.' I'll rate/comment on the one you mentioned and one more. Thanks,

DJ

I commented =] Could you please do"
- rage and love
- suicide note
- please hold my hand

Thank you oh so much =]

natz x0x

"wishing Away My Life"

and

"Heaven -is- Hell"

Thank ahead of time.

Please critique it thoroughly, especially for "Heaven -is- Hell".

~Atomic

~Till the end~
~i am complete~
~scars that heal~

**thanks**
~*Linz*~

Left comment on your poem. Great write!

Please rate & comment on the following if you don't mind:
"Dinner is served"
"If only..."
"Love... for what it's worth..."

Thanks!

J. Lau

Hey could you please comment on my newest poem "Tale of a Forgotten Soul"? I really want to know what everyone thinks about it! Thanks so much! And as always I'll return the favor!

Please read:
I'm Sorry.
Peace & Hurtful Words.
Being Me.

Thank you.

"Rip My Heart Out Yet Again"

"She Cant Love Me"

"My Sorrow"

that'd be groovy gravy thanks man,
I'm off to see yours now

aeyh could you read and tell me how to improve Moving on, or not and SOS and Crying from the Eyes and Bleeding From the Heart please xxALLYxx

okay guys.. my internet was down.. so give me a little bit to get back to you okay? i promise ill get to you all.. ill post periodically.

~David

on the inside i read your poem it was great

MY1&only and Biscuit... Done. working on a few more...

kaylee i did one of yours... but i also realised you didnt comment on mine.. so i insisted on stopping.. next..
~david

Silver and sarah.. both finished.. ill do more later...

~David

If you could choose any of my featured poems - that would be great [Just off to read yours now].

Peace. [sole]

I'd really appreciate it if you could read and comment on 'Pain', 'So called Happiness' and 'Belief'.

thanks
-kelsie

still working on it.. dont think i quit.. im just slow.

~David

I voted and commented =0) Please comment on:

She is alone
I will pretend
How come

Thank you so much

Hi please can you read
Lonely fantasy
Our rain
The fur farm

Off to see yours now =]

this would be alot easier if i didnt have dial up.. lol.. still working.

im getting this done.. one poem at a time guys... one poem at a time.

Passerby
Commandments for a Perfect Man
It Still Lives...

please r/r/c on Blood on the Rose

May you please read my three newest poems. Ill return the favor. Thanks ahead of time.

Can you read: Are You listening?

can you read my only featured one?
it has no title because i haven't found one yet,

thanks