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Hey, everyone. It`s been a while since I`ve been posting in this forum - and I`m bored. So, leave 1 or 2 titles that you`d like read, rated, and commented on. First come first serve, and I`ll keep updated whose I`ve done.
So just leave your titles here. No need to return the favor, I don`t have any new poems posted yet. =D

Samantha Hollywood

"Anniversary of Two Hearts"

Please and thanks :)

In Mommy's Arms

Same thing over again && Restless Nights..

Darien --
I`ve done your poem. Great job on it! It was creative and the rhyming was amazing. Great job, Keep up the great work!

Kaylee -
I really enjoyed reading yours, as I remember when that tradegy occured. It was really a great poem, and I`m looking forward to reading more of your work in the near future! Great job!

I will now start ♥~4ever-N-ever~♥`s poems.

Anyone else?

♥~4ever-N-ever~♥ --
I`ve finished your two poems. 'Same thing over again' was great! I would consider taking my advice on 'Restless Nights'. But overall, they were both great poems! Keep up the wonderful work.

Anyone else want some poems r/r/c`d?

the lonely feather

and

but now i am found

thanks :)

Samanthaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa =D
hey love, can you please do

Magazines and tabloids
&&
Attention
thanks sweetie

I only have one so please rrc that!
Thank you

-double post-
Sorry!

Lupine Lust
Skinny

That would be just fab darling

Hey! Could you please take a look at:

Heartbreak

&

Sickening Torture

Thank you!!!!!!

--Angie xoxo

Death. and Death (Part Two) :) thankz

Any will be appreciated. you pick :D

"A Letter From Your Soul"
and
"I'm Not Okay"

Please and thanksya muches in advance :)

~BJ~

The Darkness {Ottava Rima}

And

The Moon And Stars.

It be much appreciated... And any thing else if you want to. XD ;)

xDarkSuicidex

Sorry this took so long, guys! I had an emergency to attend. I`ll get on these right now.

Biscut --
I`ve finished your two. The first one was terrific! I think I`ll read it again later. =D. I didn`t really understand the intent of the second poem [ the lonely feather ] because the theme was sort of vague ;; but overall, great work!

Nelle --
I`ve finished your two as well. They were both terrific, especially 'attention'. The rhyming and flow you put into your poetry works out SO well! They were both terrific ;; keep it up! Great work.

Kayleigh --
I`ll ask again - WHY on earth do you only have one poem!? You`re such a great writer, that one poem I read of yours is probably one of the better things I`ve read on this site. It was really terrific, and I really hope that you write some more poetry. Great job!

Goddess --
I`ve finished your two poems. 'Skinny' was such a great poem, and I can completely relate to it, as I wrote in the comment. The flow of both your poems was so great, but I would try writing a poem that rhymes, and it can keep people`s attention on you longer. But overall, great job!! 5/5 on both!

Angie --
Let`s just let everyone know how pretty you are before I start raving about your poetry. =D
The first poem I read of yours, 'heartbreak', I had to give a 4/5 to. I just wasn`t feeling the rhyming you chose, because it had no direct pattern. It confused me a bit. But the second poem I read from you, was really good. It was short, but the rhyming was really good. The flow on both of your poems were great, Keep this up!

Brittney --
Those two poems I read of yours were AMAZiNG. Simply and truly amazing. The amount of detail each of them held is not even possible to put into other words. They were great, Keep this up FOR SURE. I want to know when your next poem comes out, because I`ll go r/r/c that one too! They kept my attention the entire time, and they were just simply great. Keep it up. 5/5 on both.

Okay, starting a new one.

GarBear --
The first poem I read from you had kind of a confusing flow. But otherwise, it was pretty good! The rhyming in it worked out well. But the second poem, 'imagine', is something I`m going to encourage a LOT of people to read. It was really touching and made me feel as if we can really make a difference, and that poem can. I`m not kidding ;; GET iT PUBLiSHED!!

Amanda --
The first poem I read from you "I wanna meet the angels" Kind of killed my impression of you, honestly. It was such a great poem, with tons of emotion, but the fact that you put slang in it and even put it in the slang category really ruined it for me. But then the next poem I read from you, the sweet 16 one for your friend, was terrific. The rhyming was kind of simple, but that`s alright. Overall, great job. Keep it up.

Brandy --
The first poem I read from you, "i'm not okay', was short and sweet. It definitely held emotion and I could really relate to it all. The next poem I read from you, 'I`m writing you this letter' was really great! You`re such an amazing writer, keep it up.

Kristen --
The poem I read from you, 'frayed pages' was really good! It held TONS of emotion, even though it wasn`t that long. The rhyming was kind of complex - it was great! Keep it up, 5/5 for sure.

XDarkSuicidex --
Your two poems are done, and they were great! Both of them had a good flow and good rhyming! I especially liked the Ottava Rima, because thats one of my favorite kinds of poetry! Great job, keep it up!!

Now that I`m done, anyone else want some done? I`ll do 1 or 2 poems per person, per day. As you can see, i`m keeping updated who`s I`ve done. First come first serve, so get posting!

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Here is a couple of my poems that rhyme.
'Dark Corners'
'Charlie'

If you fancy checking them out that would be great

Goddess --
I did one of them, and it was excellent! You should keep it up, definitely! =D I`ll check out the other one later, people wanting comments are flying in again. Take care, and well done.

Brianna --
Honey, these were terrific! My favorite one was "she can always count on the blade" it really held so much emotion for me. All three of them were terrific, keep it up! 5/5 on both, and, love ya babe!

Anyone else?

Still looking for people who want free comments! If you`re looking for some critique on your work -- leave the title of one or two poems in this thread, and I`ll do them for free. =D
If you already took this offer yesterday, feel free to do it again, just make sure you don`t list the same poems!

Thanks Much!
Samantha Hollywood

any of my latest please? thank youu!

Jessy --
I did two of your poems, 'cinnamon kiss' and 'I am no longer blind'. They were both terrific poems! I was really impressed by the fact that you had no grammatical or spelling errors, and were still able to rhyme well. You don`t see a lot of that on this site, and when you do, well, it`s just nice. You did a great job rhyming. Overall, wonderful job. Keep it up! 5/5 on both.

Anyone else?

Gotta go, everyone. =D
But if you`d like some poems r/r/c`d, please leave them here. I`ll get to them all asap!

Thanks!

Love You All,
Samantha hollywood

Hey If You Don't Mind Could You R/R/C On A Few Of Mine W.e Ones You Want To Read I Dont Mind Please And Thank You :D
Love,
Steph

Steph --
I just did "my suicide note, part 1" and I was truthfully kind of disappointed. The flow and the rhyming just didn`t work at all, and it`s much to long. Six parts make it too dramatic, especially because its a suicide note. If I were you, I`d definitely put it into stanzas ;; it makes it so much easier for the reader to grasp the intent of your work.

Anyone else?

Oh, c`mon! Who wouldn`t want some free comments?

Any of my new ones if your bored. P.S if I rhymed parts in some like you mentioned before it was unintended and would be fixed. Plus I need to edit them anyway and the flow makes sense to how they sound when said. Just letting you know.

thank you samantha! :D

Howdy could you read "Perfection" for me? Please and thank you.

I have a new one for you to read!!
It's called

"Forever's End"
Thanks :D

i have a new one if you want to read it! :P

umm I'm not really sure how to use this post thing...anyway. Could you read and comment my poem Anger? thanks xD

Wow guys, thanks for all the responses!! Here we go!

Jessy --
You`re welcome. =D I`ll get to that new one asap!

Kaylee --
I read 'hush'. Great job on that! The flow was much better, I read it out loud and you were right. Better said than read! And the fact that the rhyming pattern was the same throughout the poem helped too. Great job! 5/5

Alex --
'perfection' was a pretty good poem. The flow was terrific -- but the rhyming never stayed the same. I would consider changing the rhymes so that you have one direct pattern throughout the poem. But great job!!

Darien --
Wow, that was great! Thanks so much for sharing it with me. Not only was the title brilliant ;; so was the poem! I really liked your rhyming pattern, it definitely made a difference to the poem. Wonderful job. 5/5.

Jessy --
Wow, that was great. =D An epitaph is something you don`t see often on this site ;; it was a nice change. You did a great job! Keep it up!

Silence --
You did a pretty good job. The rhyming worked out well - but the flow was kind of iffy. The main reason I docked you was because of the grammar and spelling mistakes - just not feeling those. I would consider re-reading this, and then evaluate it yourself.

Anyone else?

Please r/r/c "A Simple Photo..." and "True Feelings". Please and thank you.

J. Lau