I Think Of You (1 for 2)

Hello you know the deal, please r/r/c on "I Think Of You" and I will r/r/c on 2 of your poems, remember to leave titles, no titles no r/r/c.

P.S. No 1 Liners, if you do expect the same in return.

Ciao, Joe

done

NOTICE: Please be warned that I am unable to leave comments on poems in the categories: Friendship and Love. I apologize for this inconvenience, but the site logs me out when I click on these poems. I will leave my comments directly in the discussion board if this problem occurs.

If you could read
"Fairytale Love..."
"Death Writtin Horror..."
I would very very gratful=)

Heres my comment...

I enjoyed the poem, with all the emotion in it. I think it could use periods and commas to break up sentences and create a better rhythm and flow for the poem. I think it was a really good poem, but I think you could have pushed it farther, as in, describe more in detail what your feeling and what relates to this. And also, pushing the words that you use, I suggest trying to break away from saying something like “I can see the future” and instead say “I can perceive eternity.” I think that would really help push your poems and make them really stand out, and possibly help show your emotions even more in depth… unless of course this is not any of the feeling your wanting than just forget everything I have said lol =P Anyways, good job, keep up the good work, you’ve got talent, just try pushing it farther! =D

All opinions in this comment are my opinions, you can choose to use them or forget them as you wish.

~*+Megan+*~

desire of death
for that one guy.

please and thank u

Megadrive Done with your poems.

¤Kitty¤ Done with your poems.

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Could you please do some of mine?
Thanks =)
Greatly appreciated!
I'm on my way to read yours...

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Done Mr. Jooe. Can you please do ''Oh so Bad!'' Thank you. Cheers!

mistressxsork done with your poems.

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κяıѕτєи ღ done with your poems.

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Anyone?

i commented you poem. could you please do the same for me.

*passing away the pain
*open your heart

thanx

i'll check it out... could you do

Eternal Love(Lyrics)
Cycle of Generations

thanks!

michelle your poems are done.

Mousie your poems are done.

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I'll get to your poem

Please read and comment:

Don't bother to call
The battle is won

ShootingStar179 your poems are done.

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Anyone?

mee done

Can you do:
Will Carry On
With Poppy

I really enjoyed reading your poem. I Think Of You. Very good. The ones I would like you to look at are. The Magic Of A Dream
My World
Thank you! Cindy

southernღcharm your poems are done.

Cindy your poems are done.

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Anyone?

come on someone, anyone?

no one?

if you'd read 'Anything to Get Out of Mind' and 'This Girl Is Everything' it'd really make my day...I'll r/r/c on yours right now :)

Okay I will do it.

Can you please do

- Depression

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-Untitled- FIRST SONNET EVER DONE!

ahhh I hate this computer. It won't let me comment you...it keeps logging me out when I try. I wrote a nice long comment, TWICE, and it got erased both times. I'll just tell you what I thought of it here, so atleast you get my feedback....

I don't normally like poetry that doesn't rhyme, which might sound immature or w/e, but I don't really care, since it's the way I am. However I liked this one, mainly because of the rhythm I saw in it. You put a good strong fluctuating rhythm into the poem that made up for the lack of rhyming. And you had a good progression of ideas and thoughts that made me read this almost like a story in thought form. very nice :). And of course, it's about strong love, and anything with strong love sounds good to me, since I write alot about that.

Overall, it was a great poem. My only tip is to include rhyming next time...but for some reason I think rhyming would ruin what this poem is, so completely disregard what I just said haha.

oh, and it's a little late but I noticed how you put a strong belief in there that whatever happens happens for a reason...which is leaning towards belief in an upper-being. added some nice flavor to your work :).

Tripp

Tripp your poems are done.

TheWorldFell&UWerentThere your poems are done.

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i would but i did it with my other account, do my latest or ill hunt you down, joe, lol.

lol Bryan.

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OKkk. Jobo, I did it! Just do the one that I have. Cos I only have one. xDD So far!

Bri.x

BriBri your poem is done.

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Anyone?

Anyone interested?

come on, anyone?