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Okay, here's the thing.

You are free to read any of my poems, it would be greatly appericated. I'm doing you a favor, so why not read one of mine?

I will close this whenever I feel like it... So be quick.

List 1 or 2 poems, and I'll R/R/C them.

LIST YOUR TITLES OTHERWISE I WON'T DO THEM!

Understand?

Good Luck Babes

Mixed up music
& Trying to be a freind

Thanks

MY1... Gotcha done babe.. thanks for the comment :)

Goth.. I did your mixed up music.. interesting... but your explicit one, I can't comment on, so this is what I said:

This definitally radiates a lot of anger and hate... I loved this line the best:

I grew up in a broken home and depressed all the time,
Now... what's really fucked up is I act like I'm fine.

Great rhyming, the only mistake I found was your last word. It should be friend*

Excellent

5/5

gotcha .... thanks for the insight!

Oh and thanks for the comment Goth.. the part I was talking about clouds.. I was pretty much saying he is in Heaven. And the second stanza talks about the main character.. a demon from hell, who has the person in her head. But yes thanks for the comment

Forever.... Excellent job ! loved the first stanza ... I would give you 5/5 but it wouldnt let me vote for some reason or other!

I beleave im going to read more...

Hey! I read two of your poems, and I just wanna say they're really great, no lies.
Could you please read some of mine. You can choose which ever. Thanks =)

Please Read Gone and Never Will We Be Together.

untitled
solitude

please and thank you, ill rrc urs later, asap.

Make Me Perfect {Kryielle Sonnet}
Ghost? Hunny, I'm Your Vampire {Terzanelle}

Enjoy. =] Thank you for the comments..
If I have time, I'll do some of yours in return. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Hello my dear:)
Could you please comment on "How it died"

Thanks

--Steph

could you please do emotion(contest poem) and simple goodbye. theyre not really new. but not wicked old either.

thanks love. =]

Depression

&

It

&

Untitled- FIRST SONNET EVER DONE

thank you so much

Depression

&

It

&

Untitled- FIRST SONNET EVER DONE

thank you so much

Woops.

Thats three.

Then do

-Depression

&&

-Untitled-FIRST SONNET EVER DONE

if you could please.

can you do these?

It's Just A Dream...
Memories Hurt

thanks.

Rona.. gotcha done babe thank you for the comments! You're lucky you commented on mine otherwise I would not have read yours. -Post your Titles-

Let me catch up... I -MAY- re-open it.. nevermind

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ShootingStar thanks for the comment, I know .. demented love.. it was for my friend I wrote it, so said she wanted like a love-hate one.. so.. I'm not that good at love... seeing how I'm a dark poet.. but I tried. :) I got the hate down though. lol Your poems were beautiful.

Kitty, thank you .. and your poems were great. :)

Sheena, your poems were good as always.

Lauren you little sneak. Yeah I got you done.. -sniff- reading my ideas.. lol.. Great poems babe.

WorldFell.. Great job!

Mousie Great Job!!!!!

HAHHAHAHAHhAhAHA... ha.. I did like a triple post

Great job every one.... -wasting air because I was too impatient to wait for it too load so i did a triple post...-

Ray thank you so much for the comments, your poem was amazing!

Everyone else.. I'm done.. -Krrplop-

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