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- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

Please go read my latest poem "Curse of Tomorow" and let me know what you think, i return, i'll comment on whatever you want.

thx

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

ok done, good song/poems :-)

anyone else

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- Name : Bethany
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Bethany
18 years ago

ok.
any of mine i dont care:-)

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

ok all done :-)

any one else?

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- Name : Kristina
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Kristina
18 years ago

i did it =]

please do any of my newest ones, thanks.

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- Name : Taylor
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Taylor
18 years ago

nice poem mister. I left a comment in hopes that you would read my latest three. could you do that for me? Thanks

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- Name : LockedInEternity
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LockedInEternity
18 years ago

done reading commenting and rating urs:)..could you please rrc:
" Hidden World"
" Black Widow"
&&
"Language of the Dead"

thankyou:)

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

ok all done, thx folks :-)

any othre takers?

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

anyone?

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- Name : Cella Bella
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Cella Bella
18 years ago

sure. I'll take you up on that offer.

This Love
Lost In Reverie
My Dreams [Part 2]

Thanks in advanced

marcella

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Name : .K.i.T.t.Y.
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Oct 15, 2006
Posts : 942

Nice poem. I gave it a 5/5.
Please comment and read:
As You Walk
Sweet Dreams
...and you can choose the last one. i'd prefer something without that many comments.

please and thank you.

- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

ok all done with those, great poems ladies and gents, and i changed that line, thx

any others?

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- Name : lashes
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lashes
18 years ago

cheers

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

done, good writing!

any one else up for it?

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- Name : omen
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omen
18 years ago

hey man good poem, could you r/r/c To HIM, Please Kill Me Slowly, and The Unrequited Lover? thanks
omen

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- Name : Jenni
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- Posts : 145
Jenni
18 years ago

done!
could you please do...

Suicide
Falling For the Back of A Quarter
&
Insert Desired Poem Title Here

thanks in advance.& please be honest about my poetry!

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- Name : e LIZ a beth
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e LIZ a beth
18 years ago

i'll do this!! :D

uhm could you please comment on

porcelian tears
single tear
and, this ones for you dad

thanks so much!! :D

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

ok done with those poems, good writing folks

any one else?

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

anyone?

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- Name : Ashleigh Skye
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Ashleigh Skye
18 years ago

done

plz comment on

"The ghosts of Tomorrow"
"Addicted to your flame"
and
"A demons halo"

thanx a bunch

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
18 years ago

done, and very nice, if anyone else sees this they should check out the person above me's work, it's good.

any other takers?

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