1 for 4 [: yay!

soooo, new poem, it's called, You Can Breathe.

It's probably not my best poem, so I want honest cricisism on it. the reason why is because i made it an acrostic. Yet, the acrostic is difficult to find.

if you find the acrostic, then type it out in the comment, if you do, you will get an additional comment on your poems.

soooo r/r/c!

well.. i did it (Y) you can comment whichever of my poems you like ...=] thank you xxx

I r/r/c'd it, but I couldn't find the message. :(

Ah well, please do:

`Dark Blue
`Secret Sensations
`My Sister's Keeper
`Hidden Soul {Cinquain}

Thank you.

well i came up with a solution to the hidden message. but i doubt it is right.

David

Done. Beautiful :]

Please do:

Don't Move On
Another Picture To Burn
Persuading Act
&
Too Good Is True

Thanks. x :]

Done..I can't find it. Lol.
These
As We Dance
Runaway
Georgia Skies
All I ask. Rate and comment pweasee

Awesome, i loved it, rated and commented 5/5 awesome
if you could do
On the edge
Black
Rapture
A New perspective that'd be awesome

I still need to comment on

BriBri [x]
Country[Soul]
broken
&
Dark Demise

yupyup.

okay, i did it, you can do my four newest, or any other ones you want,
thx so much
luv gabriella

Done, god dang it.. can't find hidden message.. grrr... lol, that's going to bug me until I find it!!

Fit Into This Mold
Did You?
Sanctuary
Black Rose

Please and Thank you!
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

i did it... couldn't find the message but oh well...

u can do any four of my poems if it's not too much trouble... thanx!

I've commented. You are such an amazing writer!

Could you comment on my four latest poems? If that's alright. Thank you very much!

yeah i can do it, can you do my four latest??? thanks so much i look forward to reading yours!

I did it.

Pick any but do Things Left Unsaid first. Thanks.

still need to do...

garbriella
perfect chaos
forever♥Yours
Sarah Ann
Mousie
&
ShootingStar179

should be done by tomorrow.