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Name : Marc Ortiz
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I have a new poem called

'The Missing Piece of my Heart'

Please Rate and comment it and I shall return the favor for 3 :) - I always rate.

*leave titles. Or I'll do random xD
*No one liners. - I will give you one line too.
*Please leave honest comments it will help me improve.
*Have fun!

- Name : Birgit
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Birgit
18 years ago

Done ^^

People, really read that poem! It's so adorable =)

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours Birgit :)

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- Name : Birgit
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Birgit
18 years ago

Yeah I seeeee =) Ty! <3

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

Np *hihi*

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours XxX Synthetic Tears Run DryXxX

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- Name : .K.i.T.t.Y.
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.K.i.T.t.Y.
18 years ago

Wait.

Does three haikus count as the only ones you rrc, since they are short?

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

Hehe :| I don't know.. Oh.. well I'm bored okay

3 haikus = 1 poem hihi so leave 2 more titles xD

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- Name : .K.i.T.t.Y.
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.K.i.T.t.Y.
18 years ago

Haha. THANKS.

Uhm. please do my triolet, andddddd... gimme a sec.

And one of your choice.

thanks again!

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours .K.i.T.t.Y.

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

Alright go go.

Just comment it ;) I'll return the favor tomorrow.. I have to sleep :|

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

Anyone else?

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- Name : BlueDreams
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BlueDreams
18 years ago

Done!

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

Anyone else?

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

Anyone else?

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- Name : Amy
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Amy
18 years ago

I'm gonna go do yours now, please do mine, if you could live your life once more, the river and memories. Thank you!

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- Name : Molly Elizabeth
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Molly Elizabeth
18 years ago

I'll definatly read it...
please read some of mine in return...
just whatever of the new ones, ok?

Take care
Molly

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- Name : ForeverYoung
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ForeverYoung
18 years ago

Done.
Amazing poem!

please do
-The Swing
-The Broken Mess You See
&
-The Healing Ends

Thankyou!

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- Name : Molly Elizabeth
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Molly Elizabeth
18 years ago

I just had to say... your poems are all amazing! Read his poems!!

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- Name : LuvLyLynn
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LuvLyLynn
18 years ago

Alright i r/c/c yours but plz i just want you to r/c/c just one of my poems it's new it's called "Paradise" let me know what you think plz and thanx yaz... ^_^

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours Molly :)

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours Steph xD

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours 4eVeRbUrZ

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

Anyone else?

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Name : Crystal Gaze
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Crystal Gaze
18 years ago

I will.

I have two senryu's.And a short poem verse.
`Sleep Daemons.
`Lemon dishes.
`For our love.
[ IF they count as one poem, you can also do..]

`The moon temptress.
`A lonely soul set free.

Thanks,
Elaine

- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours Crystal Gaze/Elaine :)

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- Name : my name is Llama
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my name is Llama
18 years ago

Done

could you please do

1.dreaming
2.black rose
and either
1.destination just simple happiness
or
2.revolution of emotions

thanks and well done
xoxo

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- Name : Boy
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Boy
18 years ago

Done done

plz do " will i always love you"

and " i was alone in your city"
and any one else.

plz do not forgett o rate asewell

thanx dear

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I did yours xbeyond helpx

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- Name : Andrew Morton
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Andrew Morton
18 years ago

Excellent work man---definetely anotehr great one from you
if you could do
- You've Left Today
- Redemption
- Time Will Come
when you get a chance i'd certainly appreciate it!

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- Name : Marc Ortiz
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Marc Ortiz
18 years ago

I'll do yours Tomorrow Andrew Morton :) - I promise

*Anyone else?*

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