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Name : N J Thornton
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Aug 14, 2004
Posts : 666

Get your free critiques here.

I'll be honest as always, if you don't like that, walk away now.

If you want to hear honest opinions on your work which may help you to improve (you never know) post one title below.

- Name : Abu3li
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Nov 2, 2007
- Posts : 46
Abu3li
17 years ago

Oh

that's great

be honest and do it

and if u have extra critique PM

i'll be grateful to you

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- Name : N J Thornton
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 14, 2004
- Posts : 666
N J Thornton
17 years ago

Which poem??

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- Name : Nix
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jun 25, 2007
- Posts : 912
Nix
17 years ago

Sure, why not, you can comment on my poem called -Between Breaths-
I will return favor, thanks in advance.

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- Name : Sweet Fragility
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Jun 22, 2007
- Posts : 295
Sweet Fragility
17 years ago

Can you please do: Poison in My Veins. Thanks.

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- Name : NyellMoonlight
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Apr 23, 2007
- Posts : 1748
NyellMoonlight
17 years ago

Please do "Figures of Pastel Infatuation". I'll return the favor :)

Thanks in advance!

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- Name : ABake
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Oct 26, 2006
- Posts : 2431
ABake
17 years ago

I want honost opinions. Lol. I hate getting those "oh this is soo wonderful" BS. Lol. Umm please do "I Can`t Get That Song Out Of My Head"

Please and thank you :]]

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- Name : SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Sep 29, 2007
- Posts : 767
SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
17 years ago

This sounds great. Will you please do "The Morning After The Night Before" please?

Thanks!

.:CiNdY:.

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- Name : Nix
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jun 25, 2007
- Posts : 912
Nix
17 years ago

Thanks on honest comment, I appreciate it I will comment one of yours tomorrow morning. :]
Have a nice day.

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- Name : Romancing the Darker Side
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jan 24, 2007
- Posts : 612
Romancing the Darker Side
17 years ago

Can you please do Method in the Madness?
Thanks. =]

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- Name : Blissful
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Oct 13, 2007
- Posts : 6284
Blissful
17 years ago

"Captured with a Smile; Left with a Tear"
thanks :]

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- Name : Brittney Follett
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Sep 10, 2005
- Posts : 677
Brittney Follett
17 years ago

On Goes the World

thanks :)

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- Name : IdTakeABulletForYou
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jun 16, 2005
- Posts : 3368
IdTakeABulletForYou
17 years ago

Hey silver
I miss ya,
haven't talked to ya in a while

sigh,
any of my featured that you haven't already done.

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- Name : Italian Stallion
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jun 16, 2005
- Posts : 8270
Italian Stallion
17 years ago

Can you please do:

Suddenly everything has changed (collab)

Thanks in advance, Joe

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- Name : Emilline
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Jan 21, 2008
- Posts : 85
Emilline
17 years ago

Yes, can you read and critique 'Passion' please?
thanks so much!!

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Name : Alexander
Status : Regular Member
Joined : Jul 29, 2007
Posts : 21

Alexander
17 years ago

If you would not mind i would very much appreciate it if you read my poem

'Coming Out Of The Closet'

It gets so annoying getting comments like 'omg that is like so totally amzing' or things like that. I mean is it very easy to actually type out your words, but it seems people are just to lazy...what it is that our world is coming too?

- Name : Rob Matt
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Oct 31, 2007
- Posts : 113
Rob Matt
17 years ago

Ill do some of urs

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=990677

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- Name : A l y s s a
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Oct 22, 2007
- Posts : 56
A l y s s a
17 years ago

I'd really appreciate if you commented

'Is Daddy Coming Home'

Thanks :)

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Name : x0XBloodyFantasyX0x
Status : Regular Member
Joined : Jan 20, 2008
Posts : 38

x0XBloodyFantasyX0x
17 years ago

Please do Forbidden Lust if you don't mind. I have a special request; please don't write critiques here, please put it in a comment on the poem, or in a private message. Thank you.

- Name : Greg Beam
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Apr 24, 2007
- Posts : 72
Greg Beam
17 years ago

Can you comment and rate my poem "Wait For You" please and thanks

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- Name : jLegendc
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Oct 1, 2007
- Posts : 73
jLegendc
17 years ago

Can you rrc my poem "reverse this curse?" tnx =]

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- Name : EssenceOfLace
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Mar 11, 2005
- Posts : 328
EssenceOfLace
17 years ago

On my newest poem r/r/c

"Dear Depression"

Thank you.

and dont worry, i will return the favor

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- Name : Jessica
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Mar 16, 2006
- Posts : 2558
Jessica
17 years ago

"The Alarm Clock"

Thank youu. :]

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- Name : Shinobi
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Aug 2, 2007
- Posts : 221
Shinobi
17 years ago

Please do "Fallen Tears" Thanks!

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- Name : Alex Marlatt
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jan 29, 2006
- Posts : 1678
Alex Marlatt
17 years ago

'Her Picture' please.

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- Name : Kristina
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : May 11, 2006
- Posts : 744
Kristina
17 years ago

Please do "I Never Thought..."

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- Name : Pesamenteiro
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Jun 8, 2007
- Posts : 265
Pesamenteiro
17 years ago

Will of life

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- Name : RobinAnn13
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Jul 27, 2007
- Posts : 283
RobinAnn13
17 years ago

Could you please do
"Rose"
Thanks in advance!
I'd be happy to return the favor, just pm me. ^.^

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- Name : HidinVictim
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Oct 26, 2007
- Posts : 346
HidinVictim
17 years ago

Can you do Real-Estate please its really different than is sounds

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- Name : Kaila
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jan 16, 2007
- Posts : 823
Kaila
17 years ago

Please do any of them except for my first ones...please do one farely new

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- Name : DJ
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Dec 15, 2006
- Posts : 99
DJ
17 years ago

I'd appreciate it if you took a look at this one, any feedback is welcome.

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1000606

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