Submission date : 2008-04-06
Last edit : 2010-02-05
Goth marionette ( F P C D )
I like that kinda write so much which is sad and deep...U expressed ur pain and sorrow in a simple and touchy way..
I enjoyed reading ur poem:)..
Good job,plz keep it up..
Dark Savior ( F P C D )
Good poem, very descriptive, I enjoyed how you painted the mood before you actually set up the actual poem, you don't see that too often.
A worrier of light I once was
-I think it's suppose to be warrior
The flow was ok, it didn't take away or give to it in any way shape or form, but it was pretty good.
Over all this poem is Excellent.
SARA ( F P C )
Thank you for your comments ... :)
And no ''Loss of identity'' is not about rape or anything like that...These things are reality and the ugly face of truth of every country & culture... My poem is about all the ugly things out there.. to all the people who suffer from them...whether it's war, rape, crime or whatever.. I believe in peace and I want it to become a reality not a dream...
Sweet As Sugar ( F P C )
Wow ! 5/5 ! loved it !
AnCi ( F P C D )
An amazing poem. I was shivering while I read it. 5/5