by Mark Spencer
Submission date : 2005-04-23
Last edit : 2012-11-22
ImmortalWiccan ( C )
OMG!!! I love it so much! i can really see what your trying to say!
Really well done with this its great it sounds like a detective movie its great i really have enjoyed reading this one :)
Em ( F P C D )
This is very powerful and captivating from start to end.
I love how your rhythm and flow is all the way through.