by Mark Spencer
Submission date : 2005-04-23
Last edit : 2012-11-22
This is very good.
i love every part.
(: keep it up, i will have to read more of your work, you got me hooked!(:
ImmortalWiccan ( C )
OMG!!! I love it so much! i can really see what your trying to say!
Really well done with this its great it sounds like a detective movie its great i really have enjoyed reading this one :)