Submission date : 2004-11-25
leonha s marie ( F P C D )
Crying from laughing!!!! "I see your face when I'm dreaming, that's why I always wake up screaming" "you take my breath away, what did you step in to smell that way?" I love love love these lines!!!!!
Jose Delapaz ( C )
Hahahahahaha...read it over Six times. .still laughing!
This is hilarious. His face in your sleep is a total nightmare hahaha! And talking of the stench....lol . Great one!
Ur poem is lyrically funny! I mean it