Motion

by Everlasting   Mar 20, 2015


Man, I don't know...

But I could be a bottle,
lost and found,
First thrown into a sea to wander
Then thrown into a sea to be found
But hey, here I am,
floating in a sea, swaying in between waves,
Then floating here, into your hands,
With a message to say:

"Be just, be Kind

Live life with dignity,
And love,

Oh love,
live life."

Written by: L.L.
Mar 20, 2015

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  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    This is a metaphoric gem this week! I adore everlastings personality and it shines within her writing...

    The feeling of being in motion, just waiting and moving in life, to live, love and be loved. This poem is unique, creative and stands out this week, just beautiful!

  • 9 years ago

    by Chamomile

    "Be just, be Kind

    Live life with dignity,
    And love,

    Oh love,
    live life"
    ^
    If I get such a message frome a floating bottle it would make my day!! I looove it, it is meaningful and in some way comforting :)

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Beautiful message conveyed trapped in the bottle swaying on ebbs of life.......

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Double post!

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A meaningful message left in a bottle seems to come to a hand when its most needed. Brilliant!!

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