Everywhere I Turn...

by Neil

I am Surrounded by liars, Everywhere I turn!
I'm Surrounded by Imposters, Wherever I turn!
I am surrounded by people with masks,
Faking their smiles.., Everywhere I turn!
I'm surrounded by Actors, Performing in the streets...
Who Pretends to be...,Everywhere I turn!
I'm Surrounded by people never true to themselves..
And I'm the only one who notices,
I'm Tired of Looking Around, Seeing nothing but Liars, and not who they're suppose to be...
I shouldn't be the only One Concerned....

 

Submission date : 2005-12-30
Last edit : 2005-12-30

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WiNgSbUrNtThEnToUcHeD ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-01

You have a great talent
use it wisely
lol
i love your poem its so truth felt
great work
I dont lie unless i absolutely have to
so my comments are the truth and nothing but
thanks for sharing
Em

never ending nightmare that neve ( F P C ) at 2006-01-30

Hey that was a gud poem it was nice i liked it alot keep up the hard work that was a tru story on life

LiFe SucKs(nadia) ( F C ) at 2006-03-19

Wow gr8t work..5/5...u got talent dnt let it go to waste lol...love dia mwaz xoxo

ashton at 2006-04-02

It is very good but it does get a bit repetetive not too much though so rounded up its pretty good

LEIGHANN POOLE at 2006-05-20

I like this poem . It kinda shows how the real world is. I was just lettting you know that your not the only one who notices it. Well it was good!



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