Submission date : 2006-04-18
Jacklyn ( F P C D )
This poem is amazing, i had this detailed picture in my mind the entire time and it never lost my attention. i love how you ended it and plus it's quiet an interesting title.
Cory Mastrandrea ( F C D )
To quote a commercial..."BRIlLIANT!" I think this poem is very publishable. Have you tried to submit it to any contests or magazines or such.
sibyllene ( F P C D )
"crazy on a ship of fools...." it's a song, and now it's in my head. this really is a good piece of writing
poetic passion ( C )
Soo lovely its breath taking 5/5 !
SilverKiss ( F P C D )
A very strong ending and a magnificient poem!