Tidal dream (etheree)

by Kasie   Jan 10, 2017


Here
I stand
Watching the
Oceans tides crash
Against the shore line.
The scent of the oceans
Sweet aroma fills the air,
And captivates my ev'ry sense
As the tides roll in and out once more
I realize this is just a gorgeous dream

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  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Kasie, very nice. Your visuals are beautiful-

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you so much

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Well done Kasie on an excellent piece! :) I love it! Stunning

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Kasie,

    I like the imaginary here..you brought me to the scene...

    well done

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Kasie,

    You seem to be making light of all things formed in poetry! Very very good. Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you. I try my best.