The Night Sky~Haiku
by Poet on the Piano Mar 15, 2008
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The twinkling stars, |
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16 years ago
by Blissful
Oh I love the corrections you made .. see I knew you could do better! I wish I could vote again and give you a five but you could only vote once. You are truly talented hon dont even let anyone tell you otherwise.
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16 years ago
by Blissful
I didn't like how you used wish twice in thie poem because I feel it threw the flow of the poem off for me. I could image everything you described clearly because I always sit in my balcony looking at the sparkling stars in the beautiful night sky. I feel this poem could be a little stronger because I know from your talent that you could do better but it was short sweet and to the point which is why I give it a *5/5* Well done.
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16 years ago
by Sarah
Very well, so good. I love this Haiku.
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16 years ago
by Krathia
The last line screamed Jane Austen at me. I don't know why, since I've only read 40 pages of Pride and Prejudice before giving up on it. I think it's because it sounds so innocent, dreamy and somehow, tragically sad.
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16 years ago
Very cute poem i love the night aswell - raindrops 5/5
