This Is All Metaphorical Though ;

by ABake   Apr 3, 2008


Looking at your left wrist my mind is in overload ; Kind of like a computer after you have clicked the " exit button " a million and six times -- No matter what you do , you just cannot find a way to close that particular window . The last time I freaked out , you watched me in amazement . [ Seven Months Later , I Am Still Trying To Close That Window ]

The [ CTRL & ALT Delete ] buttons just are not helping anymore ; My heart is stronger than that -- Metaphorically speaking , I am beating my " computer " to pieces , in hopes that it will just die ; But it won ' t give in : As far as I push it , it keeps coming back time after time . Baby , I can hear your heart beating [ It Is Extremely Fascinating To My Cynical Personality . ]

Dell , Apple , and Sony ' s pretty little Vaio are all the same ; They all have problems , they all lie to you and eventually will be replaced with someone I mean something bigger and better -- [ Although This One has Given Me Many Problems , I Can ' t Even Think About Starting Over With Another . ] I always loved the way you lit up my room in the middle of the night . . .

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    WOW Amber this was amazing and so clever! I would never thing to describe your situation with a computed but I just loved the connections you made and everything was so clear that anbody who reads it would understand. Your last line just blew me away because it tied everything in the piece together flawlessly. The theme was just so modern and so much of a joy to read. Oh my I am still in amazement. You always find different ways to express yourself and it always fascinates me.

    This has to be one of my faves by you which says a lot because each and every one of your poems leave me in awe.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by alive in death

    This sounds like it should be in cyber love section...
    but i admit, this definitly amazed me with it's cleverness... wickedly ironic write!