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by cory Apr 6, 2008
Sadness, depression /
Finding my way, I try to look back
All I can see is nasty and black
The past is seen, and reflected upon
but my whole world appears to be gone
I'm straining my eyes, I'm trying to see
A past in which, I'm happy with me
I cannot see,so I do fear
That the path's end is growing near
You can't just leave them they love you to much
Shut up stupid head enough is enough
I pull back the bolt, and aim at my head
Soon i will join the land of the dead
Stories of damned ring in my ears
My death grows nearer i conquer my fears
I pull back the trigger I feel the blast
I'm happy to know that my life has past
by divine divinity
Excellent poem! Nothing is overpowering or sounds out of place. Its simple but very effective, I like the rhythm, its steady like a march or something. Well written. Beautiful poem.
Awww sad but reli reli good
a good poem comes from the heart =]
o btw thanks for commenting my poem =]
by A Phoenyx in Flight
Omg this poem is sooo sad
i love it though
Wow! Imagery was AMAzing! The poem really went into me and made me in my mind live it all through, incredible!
Very sad, so so deep! I really loved it!
Keep it up!
by Beautiful Chaos
Dear sweet Cory, you do know how to write your pain, it is good to see you back in our midst again.