Just A Bit Delusional.

by Teria   May 14, 2008


With that gruesome hair cut
and my repulsion high -
the circumstance seems,
just a bit delusional.
an abyss of rays,
guarded by the sun,
fight back the tears -
and you shoot the gun.
inconceivable thoughts,
become such reality,
with meticulous words
written page by page,
and God's torrent of proof,
that your life's somehow ended...
leaves my repulsion high,
and the circumstance, it seems
just a bit delusional.

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  • 15 years ago

    by lisa marie

    I like the how these lines were repeated

    "and the circumstance, it seems
    just a bit delusional. "

    and the word choice was great.

  • 15 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Short but very good.Your word choice here was utterly fantastic.Very well written.5/5

    -Amber

  • 15 years ago

    by El

    Very powerful poem
    It is well writen and i like the way the lines are short and in quick sucession (sp?)

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like this well done xx

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