Can You Hear Me?

by Poet on the Piano   Jun 6, 2008

Can you hear me, I'm calling,
Don't you care that I am falling?
Right now I'm down in this dark hole,
I feel like I'm losing complete control.

Still here waiting just for you,
Do you know what I'm going through?
Darkness is creeping slowly inside,
I don't know how much longer I can hide.

Soon I must get out on my own,
And face the world all alone.
I need your guidance and advice,
Do I really have to ask you twice?

Can you hear my desperate plead,
Of how much I am truly in need?
All I want is a good and real friend,
Someone who stays with me till the end.

But you have proved to be nothing like that,
Instead, you are a selfish and know-it-all brat.
You said you didn't have time for me,
And was to busy to help with my plea.

So I will move on in life trying to survive,
Hoping to be successful and to thrive.
I will never be able to forget you at all
And how you never did hear my call.


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  • 10 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    A lovely poem keep up the good work! =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Oh woww..that was incredible..but u know WHAT i LIKED the most was
    I will never be able to forget you at all
    And how you never did hear my call.

    It's really true that we cannot forget pple who give up on us that is why it leaves scars n our hearts and it hurts badly and especially when they r close to us...
    good job..keep it up;)

  • 10 years ago

    by Lil Ally Kat Xx In love xX

    Man that kinda questions u abt ur friends, like f they r really there 4 u or not.. I like it!!! Its good work and ur welcome 4 the comment!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Lifeless juggalette

    Nice one i really like your peom it was really sad i went though this a lot i just hope you make more good and great poems

  • 10 years ago

    by xoxSwissCheesexox

    This is such a good poem!! Awesome job!!