I Promise

This is really beautiful! Wow!

Our poems are somehow connected...The theme is actually almost the same...its like, I Promise I Love You, ((The Right KInd Of Wrong))..

Where there is no cultural debate
A place where no religions to hate
People live life like as it is
I promise I'll love you there
Like an open breeze

^ Trust me these lines brought tears to my eyes..You have no idea how powerful these lines were.

Just there where my brothers don't fight
No war and no soldiers on either side
No discriminations for any colour and race
I'll be waiting for you there
To see your angelic face

^ These touched my heart too..

I simply love how you write..You have a very powerful message thru your poems..

I was truly touched with the whole poem..

Keep writing !!

Love definitely knows no boundaries and you speak of that so well in this write. I loved the message of never ending love and come what may you will always be there.
BTW thank you for the nice comment on my poem and sorry it has taken a while to read yours.

Its a touching poem and u expressed many emotions init. I could really fell the desire as you promise to love the person

The part "i promise i'll love you with all my rave"
doesn't make sense, but other then that, well constructed rhyme scheme and pleasant imagery.

Keep writing and reading!