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by Kuro Aug 11, 2008
Sadness, depression /
Feeling regret from your sins
Feeds to the torment and then it begins
To consume all your thoughts
Changes your goals that you have sought
Giving up, giving in
To the hatred built within
Hearts become deeply heavy
Morals seem weak and petty
Something self-created can only be self-destroyed
Once it's don it leaves a void
The scars remain, never forget
You were the cause of your own torment
You regret your choices
Stop listening to the voices
Telling you what to do
They don't care about you
We all have our demons that we face
If you ignore them you'll be a disgrace
To all you stand for and why you've been fighting
They will bring you down or die trying
by Of Sweet Insanity
This is SO good.
I added it to my favorites.
"Giving up, giving in
To the hatred, built within
Hearts become, deeply heavy
Morals seem, weak and petty"
Jeeez, you're SUCH a great writer.
This poem gave me a lot to think about.
Absolutely phenomenal bub.
5/5, once again..
by Love Panda
Nicly done. had me on the end of my seat wanting to keep reading, i really wish it was longer so that i could just keep reading. nice description of things.ibe
Nice work, good word choice...rings true.