My Lonely Angel

by Nobodys Hero   Aug 12, 2008


My eyes conceal such heartbreak
Tales of carnage now descend
So afraid and very broken
Heaven mocks me once again

Angel can't you hear me?
Are my tears just in vain?
If I end this hell right now
Will I see you once again?

Tell me can you see me?
I'm losing this twisted game
This life holds no more beauty
Yet so much loss and pain

Cradle me softly as I sleep
My angel I need you so
Past this grave I cannot see
These memories forever flow

I'm so sorry my lonely angel
I know I promised to try
Will you be here next to me?
As my life now passes by

Copyright © August 2008

[Different from my other work but I thought I'd try]

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  • 6 years ago

    by Boy

    I'm so sorry my lonely angel
    I know I promised to try
    Will you be here next to me?
    As my life now passes by

    my favorite stanza. i really enjoyed this piece. 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    This is sad and great.. this poem make me sad and wow. no more can i add but keep it up.

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    Wow! your words are very much a gift, as they express the feelings we all have/had in our lifes. Good job 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Dian PH

    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Its very unique... and its look dramatic for me.. love it