A Beautiful Fairytale.

by Courageous Dreamer   Nov 14, 2008


*This is a little cliche, I know that. Sorry. I am just writing from actual feelings and wanted to finally put this dream of mine into words.* :]

Walking down the paved path to meet her dream come true,
the cool breeze swiftly sends her hair in an unexpected twirl.
Beautiful brown strands float freely and intertwine as she walks,
soonly rounding the sharp corner, to find her man holding a bouquet.
Her baby blue eyes connect with his instantly sparking a radiant smile,
tears stream from her eyes in realization that her dream is coming true.

Running as fast as she possibly can, she finally reaches his arms.
He picks her up in a heartbeat swinging her around, kissing her cheek.
Love fills the air as the two embrace each other tightly never intending-
to let go, he whispers in her ear those words she wished to hear,
"I love you" escapes from his lips, butterflies instantly fill her heart.
This long awaited dream finally becomes what they both wished to be.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    No offence, but this poem needs a lot of work before it even comes close to being a excellent write. The puncuation was good. Your overall concept of the poem was well thought out, but with a few adjustments this could be an outstanding write. For one if you can split these "paragraphs" into stanzas the structure would be good. Other than that minor detail, I think this was very well written, great job, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 15 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Wow temps..this was awesome. it was filled with a lot of love, and obviously deep emotions that you have been wanting to write out. this was beautiful and i loved the ending to it. great job and keep it up. 5/5
    **harlea

  • 15 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    This is one of my dreams in life, to find someone who is truly there for me, nice poem, it may be cliche but the words you choice make it different^^

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This is a beautiful poem. The wording was great and really created the mood of the poem. There is nothing wrong with it being a little cliche. This is a poem of what people look for in love and hope that something along these lines will happen to them. Good job =) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Yes , a little cliché , but i like the imagery and the way your words flow into one another . Good job . 5/5

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