Stars

by mossgirl19   May 7, 2009


Jewels in the sky, cure to lonely hearts silently watching you.
Ever so distant, but so close, so near upon a gaze.
Fireflies that glitter, formed like dippers, and zodiacs too.
Rising along with darkness to give little sparks of hope.
Eavesdropping to faint prayers whispered to the wind.
Drop one by one in exchange for thy weary hearts wishes.

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  • 6 months ago

    by Ben

    So i'm creeping about your poems and among others find this little gem....I love a poem with stars...and thought provoking lines....and great delivery....seriously this is an awesome write.

    in particular I love the overall sentiment, very calming to the readers soul ( in my opinion) and none of the usual cliches that are normally found (including my own writing) in writes of this type, i thought that your word choice was spot on and the rhythm of the poem was perfect.

    Epic write right here, added to favs for future moments of serene contemplation ;)

    Ben :)

  • 8 months ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    If this hasnt been nominated already and i actually could.. I would in a heart beat.This is going in my favs either way. Not one thing wrong with this. Great peice!(:

  • 8 months ago

    by Gwenyth Hill

    This is beautiful... A perfect way to describe stars!

    Gwen

  • 8 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    As the last thing I read before sleep takes me.

    This will do nicely.

    Lovely

    Craig x

  • 9 months ago

    by Alex Yew

    Profound writing.
    Love it.

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