Chainsaw In My Chest

by Mezmeryz   Jul 18, 2009


Why is the heart concerned with pain?
And the brain concerned with thought?
Heart receives blood from veins,
And for brain, knowledge is sought.

If the heart existed alone,
Would it still be concerned with pain?
Because there's no brain to feel,
Would the heart still feel the strain?

Because what I've been feeling lately,
Tearing through my chest,
Is more or less a chainsaw,
In a 'who-dies-first' contest.

I've really had enough of this,
Missing you everyday.
Like a reality show gone wrong,
I just want to walk away.

I want to rip out this chainsaw,
Tearing through my chest.
I want to be able to breathe again,
I want to be able to rest.

I can't take this anymore,
You keep running through my head.
If this is what losing you feels like,
I much rather be dead.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I am one of those poet that is impressed with expression over any unknown skills that many seem to site as they wish to place poetry out of the reach of those who have not been officially accepted into the quote literary world. None the less you expressed eloquently enough something I have felt.

  • 8 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I liked the imagination and creativity in this. There isn't another like it that I have read. Your flow was effortless an excellent write.
    Enjoyable

  • 8 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    3rd stanza L4
    A 'who-dies-first' contest
    In a ----------------------- perhaps?
    6th stanza L3
    If this is was losing you feels like,
    --------- what ------------------------ perhaps?

    Rhymes beautifully and flows well an excellent start and a strong finish.

    An excellent poem any one who is old enough and has share love with someone then lost it orhas been hurt by him or her knows the feelings you have so strongly written in your poem 5/5 Ray S

  • 8 years ago

    by Norbert

    Awesome poem!!...I love the title of it!