Icicle Smile (tanka)

by Angie   Feb 17, 2010


Icicle Smile

outside my window
clinging onto the gutter
frozen winter treat
ranging from one to six feet
glistening in the cold night

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  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    To me, you will always be the tanka form queen.. you bring this little form to justice with such grace.... very pretty~

  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I mean I'm trying to see itbut I just can't! I'm sorry I'm in Florida!!! HAHAHA I love this so...so simple but great. You rock my socks...lol

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderful description of winter and the icicle formed...
    well written...

  • 14 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Very well written!! Don't forget to knock 'em down so you're not trapped inside. LOL I just love simple forms especially when they're done correctly.

  • 14 years ago

    by Melissa

    Don't you just love the snow? It seems everyone is getting to see it this winter, even here in SC. It's been a blast, and your tanka is certainly fitting for the season. :)