My tears aren't tears

by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy   Apr 10, 2010


My tears aren't tears,
their fear's deep lost
in space."my dear,my
dear, come here" is all
I hear.

My tears aren't tears
their blood drops
from heavens lost.
"My dear don't fear."
Is what I hear, My
heart is suffering
from blood lost.

My tears aren't tears
their acid from my
deadly soul. My
eyes are fading away,
my smile is falling
apart, and my hair
is falling out,only a few
patches left.

As I fade away
I saw a new place
I have never seen
before.

As I walk down the white
clouds and next to
a golden gate,a
sign says "Heaven"
in rusty letters.

as I push a girl out of
"heaven" my friend
on earth tells a male,
"Do you see her
falling??...that's your
darling..."

falling past Heaven,
Earth and into hel
l"What did i do to
deserve this?!?"
Is all she yells.

And again,my tears aren't
tears, their fears deep lost
in space.

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  • 13 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    So cool. You could put this one to music. "Fears lost in deep space." My favorite part.

  • 13 years ago

    by LongLostSoul

    I liked it..it's deep and filled with emotion... 5/5 =D nice work..

  • 13 years ago

    by The Black Stallion

    Very good and hard hitting with emotion i liked it a lot def one of the best ive read

  • 13 years ago

    by Twisted Angels Whispers

    Wow really good. This one took me on an adventure. I really liked how you ended the poem with the first three lines of the beginning.
    The punctuation was a little hard to read at times. However really good overall :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I dont wana say what or hjow this poem would be better..im gna talk about the concept..tho u can do it a lot more deeper but.. let me be honest too :
    yyour msg is received..well done

    ur title is catchy..i wanted badlyt o knw at u meant by ur years are not tears..

    5/5 i hope u dont realy feel this ssadness i catch in ur words

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