I really liked this poem. It was very thought provoking and I am kinda speechless at the end as well. The emotions in this piece are ranging from everywhere. The poem seems to be telling more of a story then just being emotional though if it was then those were some deep lines. I really like how it flowed from each line to the next and also the structure was descent as well. I tried finding one part that stood out to me but I couldn't find one as it really was all creative and unique.
All in all, I think you are evolving in maturity as a poet and your talent is ever increasing as you write. Hope to see more wonderful poetry from you. Great job and keep writing.