Eternal Love

by Sourav   Jan 14, 2011


Sitting there with your blank eyes waiting for an eternity
Although you know he is never going to come back
With every moment passes away like immortal infinity
Only, dust erupts from his ever deserted solitary track;

Wind plays with your untidy hair, birds fly and sing
You sink in your thought, try to hold back the time
But time flies relentlessly by its indefatigable wings
Love is denied but love hasn't died only life pasts the prime.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    Sourav,
    Very delicate and touching
    Love Denied too is beyond question Eternal.Beautiful attempt

  • 13 years ago

    by Katy

    Very sad when you lose someone you love even though the world around you lives on

  • 13 years ago

    by M Colella

    This brought tears to my eyes, what love when even death can't touch it's beauty. You have written the meaning of forever
    wonderful poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a heaviness of sadness in each line..it is difficult to cope when you lose the one you love..beautifully sad..

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sourav
    What a beautifuly sad piece you have penned. When you lose someone you love that deeply it is hard not to wish them back. Depression can get hold of you and pull you down where you don't see the sunshine or hear the birds sing. It blinds you to everything around.
    Great job!

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