Wow! Mohamed, this poem is so beautiful and touched my heart! I LOVED the idea of the moon being sad and singing, and having emotions... such lovely personification. The first stanza really drew me in and it was my favorite stanza! Beautiful poem :)
and as another person who have been touched yet as a learner of this life, cant leave my comment without reminding you as I remind myself, that sometimes we are the ones who bring hurt to our heart then blame others just cause they did not satisfy our minds! No body can break you heart or your pride and I doubt anyone would want to, unless you allow them to, or perhaps--think that they did! Such passion for a she, can never be for someone who have hurt us...nopes, and I think the contradiction in ur emotions in this poem, proves my theory Right.
This is the best you have ever written .. OMG! I never in a million years thought something like this poem could ever affect me that much .. It put tears in my eyes (and I hate that) but I loved it so very crazily much.
A standing ovation and a nomination on this one 5/5 ..