Serenade of a shattered soul

by A lonely soul   Aug 8, 2011


My spirits are battered
the soul completely shattered
in a zillion pieces, scatterred
like stardust in the night sky

How can I ever put it together
when an angel turns away
a serenade from the soul
like no other have I ever played
in this lifetime for another

What have I done wrong
what indeed to deserve
such a chastisement
a cold whipping
to a warm beating heart
stolen without permission

If friendship is a vice
and love a crime
then the heart
is ready to abnegate
the soul ready to be set free
and my muse ready for a burial

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  • 6 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    WOW WOW AND ANOTHER WOW, I truely love this poem. In my opinion everythinh in this poem is perfect:)

    If friendship is a vice
    and love a crime
    then the heart
    is ready to abnegate
    the soul ready to be set free
    and my muse ready for a burial
    ^^^
    this is my fav stanza:)
    Ofc a 5/5 from me, I would like to give u more:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    I swear I was reading that while rapping it!

    Your words, and rhymes were very smooth, and I was moved with my thoughts being provoked.

    Amazing write.

  • 6 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Now this is an anothr sad poem..but it is penned so wel by d excellence of d poet..

    Saying abt being hurt and up to d core dat even soul alng wid d hrt has been shattered.
    And a ques ,wil i able to be love smone else nw?
    Coz d voice of heart has been stolen by u.
    And i love this line whr u said..'a cold whimping to a warm beating hrt'..
    And if fshp is bad and lv is crime..then it al happens..hrt abnegates and muse ready fr burial..
    Awesome write..my friend..

  • 6 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Great poem, I don't understand why we blame ourselves or try to find a reason for losing in love. Good poem short but expresses so much.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sounds like the sole inspiration in your life left you with a sour taste of a relationship that has not understood each other..touching write.